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Kylan says...



I am elated by "Inhibition". One of the highlights of this collection. A beautiful synthesis of two Wrights. I want to write like this.

Kylan
"I am beginning to despair
and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

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Lumi says...



Nothing is running away. Least of all,
time. The taxiwoman is singing in the dark
as she passes the speedlimit. Flash.


I love you.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Jagged says...



One day I will get over how you can make every poem so very colorful, even when you take a more muted approach to it, and how it makes me want to just sit here and reread it all.

Today is still not that day.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Button says...



All of your work is excellent, but this last poem is just...breathingtakingly so.
  





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Uraziel says...



How do you do this with language?
  








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