Okay well I've never done NaPo and I'm starting this a little late so expect more than one poem on some days. I'm going to try out some different types of poetry but this first one is just one I wrote really quick. (I'm not very good at poetry so if anyone has any tips feel free to tell me) Hopefully I'll get better as the month goes on.
~peanut~
April 4th, 2010
Poem 1: Chain Reaction (Probably not the title)
The house quivers
like an arrow shaking against a bow.
A cobalt bow falls from the mantle,
and the fire consumes.
The fire is hate,
loathing that sucks the life
from all beings.
The little girl reaches for the blue strip.
Death smiles as He watches
the tongues licking the girl.
Her clothes catch;
the bow is no more.
No more tears fall.
The mother’s eyes have desiccated,
her heart burns with sorrow.
Sadness fills her world.
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