Ok so my aim at the moment is to have three sections, ten poems in each, twenty-one lines in each poem. Let's see how that goes! Also I'm experimenting with extended sonnets so my first fourteen lines are conventional Shakespearean stuff, and I'm adding an extra seven lines to it to reflect my age.
Section One: Beginnings
Poem I- As I Emerge
Everything is clearer above water.
I can hear so much better on the land-
I am no longer the ocean's daughter,
the skin between my toes is raw from sand.
My eyelashes are silver with sea salt.
It stings. I cry, can't leave water behind.
I press my heels hard on each pebble's fault,
and now the raw skin peels. I begin to wind
my wet hair round my hand and wring it dry,
and fill my lungs with this new oxygen.
My bare shoulders turn crimson as they fry.
I'm more than terrified of my new skin.
Save for the seagulls' shrieks I am alone,
the newest debris which the wind has blown
into life without a consultation.
I move towards the dunes, the marram grass
scratches my ankles- a dry sensation
until the blood runs down, and then I pass
through it, to the peak, imagination,
safe haven, and I smile 'til the wind flies
and pushes me to even ground ('s guise).
Poem II Homesick
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