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WISTERIAAAAA!!!!!!AHHHHHSHUXIWIW Your thread your thread your thread! First of all, the idea of using the solar system and the constellations as inspiration for poetry- genius, I tell you, absolute GENIUS. Because of this, all your celestial themes and imagery stand out so much, and have so much meaning assigned to them depending on which planet/ other entity's perspective this reads from
- simply put, your thread is beautiful and incandescent and utterly breathtaking. Some of my favorite lines -
Spectacular work, wist <33333
- simply put, your thread is beautiful and incandescent and utterly breathtaking. Some of my favorite lines -
to sublimate into something tolerable.
My clothes are made of ice,
and I have forgotten what my mother looks like
I do handstands for her across the orbital plane,
but she never spares a glance my way.
My hands hurt.
my saccharine daydream,
my glorious escape,
two hundred years is serrated agony
when it’s keeping me away from you.
I will gladly sit and let the time pass by,
but I will be bleeding through every second.
and the most gorgeous color
is blood spilled for others.
But my hate doesn’t matter,
not when you are the stars and I am a ghost,
not when you are something beautiful,
and I am something rotting away.
Spectacular work, wist <33333
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