22. dedication Love like an ocean in over your head so great a devotion no matter the tears you shed not just infatuation a bond strong and true genuine dedication i say all these things for you
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True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
23. candlelight some call love a flame but why would one’s love be compared to a destructive heat an uncontrollable burn all flames eventually reduce to ashes though i do see small inklings of their point for your love gives me warmth; a comforting glow and sometimes i melt away as if you sit atop a charred wick burning away gently perhaps the mask i wear is made of wax for it is gone now i need not wear it around you
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True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
24. He has a green thumb a love one has never felt before compassion reaching the heights of the sycamore not just pure coincidence, no it’s a sign kindness surpassing needles of the pine love and mercy, my God is good larger and greater than any redwood Power and honor above all of these carefully crafted each one of our trees…
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True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
alkshfbgakjdshfkasdyg 24 is aMAzing. i am always HERE for the God poems. you capture creation so beautifully, and the ending implies what we don't understand about God. fantastic job; keep up the great work, you're almost there! <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
25. zephyr nestled in a hug taking a deep breath of inexplicable happiness for this sweet aroma of freshly carved wood the richness of an oak or eucalyptus swaying in the breeze softened by the sweetness of coconuts buried in the warm sand a sharp mint smeared through i open my eyes my face buried between the folds of fabric
True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
i am here for those scent descriptions! totally underrated in poetry. you really capture the magic of smells and how they can evoke feelings and memories. it's like you transported me to a little bit of paradise through this poem! also, bonus points for the mint =PP
@Spearmint, I TOTALLY AGREE! i love smells, i feel like they oughta be written about more. it's funny since i'm normally one to notice how someone smells and i think my friends feel a little strange when i tell them they smell nice >.> thanks so much!
True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
27. daisies; innocence & new beginnings There is a place where the daisies bloom And the sun rests softly on the horizon Laying its head gently on the mountains Blanketed by clouds As it dozes off peacefully The vibrant green fields Fading into a cool darkness
This place only is found When one leaves another This one; withered, parched Fractures webbing from the hard desert clay Where rivers once ran Only dust and ashes remain A dead silence interrupted only by Searing winds and tornados The rustling sand weathering you away
The soft patter of footsteps Into this dim ambient night Illuminated by the pale brightness of the moon And flickering fireflies Resembling the pinhole stars As the wind sighs over the plains Though we’ve traveled far It will never be the same
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True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
28. the main character’s love interest you make me feel like the girl the narrator always talks about with articulate detail one with the cinnamon eyes like wells of water; deep-- easy to get lost in or with caramel dipped hair that he says to be soft and silky like a baby’s blanket that girl that smells like a poured chocolate drizzle on vanilla ice cream the one he’d say is beautiful all the time no matter her state or the one that makes him laugh uncontrollably as she presses her fingers right to his tickle spot though he hates it he still loves her so tells her over and over i will never tire of it
True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
29. tickled mirth i get a different glimpse of you from this new point of view as you begin with your titters small beginnings of convulsed laughter-- laughter i've never heard this way this one; joyful and wild
playful poking until you're rolling on the floor i apologize-- your smiling cheeks push the tears out of your eyes-- but we both know i'm not all that sorry
True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
30. when i blow you kisses, will you catch them? you’re unlike any other romantic trope i’ve read of i spent days as a young girl dreaming of my first love yet this is nothing of what i expected in fact, it’s better than my childhood expectations as my naive self mooned over those couples that take long walks on the beach sharing kisses under the sunset [though there’s nothing wrong with these] i find that i cherish our laughs [over the most childish things; the bizarre expressions you send me, your face barely peeking into the frame of the photo] i pine over your awkwardness [as the acrylic covered paintbrush slips through your fingers] i’m in love with your mannerisms [especially when you run into the wall just to make me laugh] and the way you hold my hands [it’s far more romantic when we turn it into a thumb war] or the gentle kisses you give me [only to stop me from tickling you] or the way you flirt [just to get me to hug you-- or pummel you lovingly] it seems almost as if every poem i write is for you since you’re a dear wish that’s actually come true so as we bid our farewells at the end of our [finger tangled] day i watch you [in the passenger seat from my front door] putting my hand to my mouth; sending forth my love for you you put your hand own out [the window, fingers stretched] and place your palm over your lips
True love is the greatest thing in the world except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open And if so I wanna know what time it shuts
Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing To tell you that you're something else
YOU DID SO GOOD THIS MONTH HONEY!!! and i know your rizz man is happy too. EEEE I'm so proud of you
I won't go down by myself, but I'll go down with my friends I'm taking back the life you stole Came a time when every star fall brought you to tears again
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