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Fri Apr 14, 2023 10:47 pm
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Hijinks says...



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omg I love that you wrote 11 poems in a day xD

Your poems in this thread have a really distinctive style! As I'm reading them, I feel like each poem is a snapshot or vignette that captures a specific moment/emotion. The images are super vivid, intense, and to the point, which I adore.
a wisp in the air, a whisper out loud,

Love the repetition of "wisp" here.

I think #10 might be my favourite - it has this sort of dystopian feel that's very captivating. It's just vague and mysterious enough that I'm left turning it around in my mind after reading it! Keep up the wonderful poeting <3
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