ohmygoodness euph i love both of these poems so much! i love how short number 2 is. in those four lines, you're able to say so much with so little. your true artistry is really shining through this napo. i can't wait to read more!! <33
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
@LuxLuthor thank you, it's good to know it's worth the time looking for them! >.< @momonster AHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU! since poem 1 was so ~wordy~, i wanted to take on something small and meaningful for poem 2 - I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! and omg you flatter me too much, "true artistry", !!!!!! AHHHH I'M SOBBING THANK YOU THANK YOU <3333333
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
oh my gosh euph. just when i think your poetry can't get better, it does! i love everything about this poem. the lines in parentheses seem more personal and intimate, while the other lines seem more open and public. you're doing amazing; keep up the great work! <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
AYXBEUDBE WHERE YOU WRITING THIS IN MY THREAD WHILE I WAS WRITING IN YOURS??? AH! <3333 thank you so so much, and you got it bang on with the parentheses! I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying! <3
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
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Just wanted to stop by your thread to say how much I'm enjoying your poems this month, Euphory!! I especially love 4 and 5; 4 flows so well and has a great rhythm to it, and 5 just has beautiful language all around ("every law in the universe assumes" is such a wonderful line !!! just wow). Look forward to reading more! <3
i love how you take love and put it in such a dark point of view. not just the happy joyous parts of love, but the painful, hurtful parts as well. i think number 5 is my favorite so far. keep up the fantastic work! <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
@figmoon thank you so much! I usually struggle with getting the rhythm right most of the time, so hearing that makes me super happy! I'm glad to know you're enjoying <3 @momonster yeahh, love can be vicious sometimes. i'm so glad that got through (and also???? Your favorite?? AHHH what an honor !!! <3) thank you so so much! <3
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
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