You're so close to your goal! Best of luck getting that last one in, I particularly love poem 14 because it has all my favorite imagery - beautiful ending too. Your poems all seem to focus on such nice concrete images and then expand into these beautiful little reflections. Lovely to read.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy. — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
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