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4/4

Computers
(an exercise in anagramming)

computers
[can be used 2 make]
curt poems
[because u know we]
must cope, [o]r
[we'll]
mope crust
[and face a]
puce storm
[but rest assured,]
comets r up
[and u can]
c most pure[ly]
[when u]
c [ur] poem rust

without formatting:

computers
can be used 2 make
curt poems
because u know we
must cope, or
we'll
mope crust
and face a
puce storm
but rest assured,
comets r up
and u can
c most purely
when u
c ur poem rust
mint, she/her


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4/5

Ramblings
(aka, when you go too long before restarting,
aka, sleep-deprived thoughts)

shoulda coulda woulda
so why didn'tcha?


regret.
to gret again?
r greet.
who am i greeting?
you, me, myself, and i
or myself through the gray-tinted lens of
not enough, never enough?
(quite the opposite of a
snowy white egret, you know)

sometimes i just feel so behind.
(hi bend, h in bed, ben hid)
like i just need an extra day to do
all i shoulda coulda woulda done today.

today.
to the day?
a tody.
yeah, i wonder what it'd be like
being a tody.
green-crimson-white plumage,
eating insects in the forest...

but all i have is
tomorrow.
worm root.

because this is not a reversible reaction
and here you cannot ctrl+z to undo
mint, she/her


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Ventomology says...



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OK BUT ACTUALLY breaking apart words and dissecting the parts and finding new meaning (or altering the connotation of the meaning) is so cool. It's awesome to see that play out within a poem like this. And it comes built-in with assonance and consonance and all the goodies! 10/10 I love it.
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They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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AHH thank you!! All your comments make me smile so hard omg. XD <333
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Thu Apr 06, 2023 9:18 pm
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4/6

Loops & Blessings

i know i should
count my blessings.
a house, a family, good food, light, life, love, laughter-
an infinite loop.
while (true) {
....blessings++;
}

shouldn't this list, this array of length > Integer.MAX_VALUE,
be enough to make me happy?
(if all the reactants are present for a spontaneous reaction,
shouldn't it proceed?)

yet knowing and feeling are different
and there are days when my battery is drained
my limiting reactant has been used up
and it is all i can do
to count to three.
for (int i = 0; i < 3; i++) {
....blessings++;
}
sleep();
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Thu Apr 06, 2023 9:43 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



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Oh my god as a programmer myself I am especially in love with this latest poem <3
Unofficial Blue Cat of YWS =^-^=
she/her please <3
  





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aww, thank you, @TheBlueCat!! Always great to meet a fellow programmer :D
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4/7

Burnout

Burnout.
Not quite as dramatic as a
computer catching on fire, or a
beaker exploding.
But a problem nevertheless.
(And not a fun one, like a 3D puzzle or
a math problem in which all the fractions cancel out.)

I've been fortunate,
collecting A's like an oxidizing agent collecting electrons in a redox reaction,
not part of the 30% of U.S. computers infected by malware.
But heat transfer is a thing,
and my screen can't help but glitch in empathy.

Isn't there something wrong with a school
where students insist on going to class
even when they're sick, tired, miserable?
(I can't afford to miss class. I need the grade.)
Where they compare test scores, summer programs,
extracurriculars, achievements, their lives?
("Oh, nice!" they say, swallowing their insecurities.)
Where college and a career and their future
are more important than
the present.

...
even a top-of-the-line computer
slows down eventually.
perhaps i'm not as immune as i think.

Image
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Spoiler! :
Why is this the most relatable poem like ever?
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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ahhh <333
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4/8

Languages

English is so funny.
We have chair, chopsticks, change, checkers...
And then there's chemistry.
(っ °Д °;)っ
Like, how does "ch" become "k"??

Also, salmon.
How does the "l" disappear??
If you're not going to pronounce it,
why put it in there in the first place? >:(

Como estudiante de español,
tengo que decir que
creo que el español es mucho más sensato.
(❁´◡`❁)

(As a Spanish student,
I have to say that
I think Spanish is a lot more sensible.)
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Spoiler! :
As someone with dyslexia, I wholeheartedly agree with this poem and English and I have all of the beef.

Also, I love your emoticons!!! It makes the poem so adorable!!!
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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lol xD and hehe thanks!! emoticons ftw :3
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... when you study more Spanish, you will find out that every language is somehow horribly flawed, lol.
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well. hopefully not as flawed as English, at least... XD (irregulars are bad, but not as bad as English's plain weirdness, in my opinion...)
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