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Who Is Dancing In My Tomb?



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Wed Apr 06, 2022 4:01 pm
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SoullessGinger says...



I'm a few days late BUT it's fine! I'm excited to write lots of poetry this month!! I'll aim for 30 and see what happens!
P.S. Remember to do at least one nice thing for yourself today! I’m glad that you’re alive :)
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Wed Apr 06, 2022 4:05 pm
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1. The Boy In the Arena

Do you hear the cries of the children?
Youngest I’d wager is ten.
I’d wager he’s small
Will he grow tall?
In the walls of the Crimson Arena.

Do you hear the stories they tell?
They say the child is going to hell.
I’d say he’s innocent
It’s a mystery, isn’t it?
In the walls of the Crimson Arena.

Do you hear the jingle of gold?
Adorning the belt of the boy grown old
What does he do, to earn his pay?
The graveyards are full by his hand, they say.

The boy has left the Crimson Arena.
But the Crimson Arena will never leave him.

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This one is about one of my characters, Lyrth. I play him in multiple dnd campaigns, and the Land of the Eternally Bound (Roleplay Realm).
P.S. Remember to do at least one nice thing for yourself today! I’m glad that you’re alive :)
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Thu Apr 14, 2022 5:40 pm
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2. Off On One, Don't CHU

Tapping of the foot
code into sound into voice
the rhythm flows free

Ba dop ba-da dop
snap crackle pop and pizzazz
it's seven am

one hour ev'ry day
piecing together the tunes
bouncy new music

tri-pul-et, half step
dotted quarter note, diphthong
the language of it

currents of tension
build up, fall back, crescendoooo
like magic, my jazz

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My school has a jazz choir that meets at 6:50 am- it's one of my favorite parts of the day.
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Thu Apr 14, 2022 5:56 pm
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3. Day

Dream
Wake up
brush your teeth
wash your lovely face
make breakfast, two scrambled eggs
drive to school in the rain
sing jazzy tunes for forty-five minutes
then switch half notes for tall, round vowels
An hour of downtime- coffee and muffins with Rosie
Old pages, dates, and immorality swirl in the next class
Then freedom! Drive home for lunch (tuna and pepperjack and sourdough)
More music- reaching for greatness with Day and Bartoli, classical and contemporary
Back to school; hours of rehearsal, doodling, dancing, dying of boredom (side character)
into the woods! a baby doll named Steven, did I memorize ALL my lines?
Home, to sleep, to dance around some, pet my dogs, say goodnight, and drift off.

....
From 1-15, my day.
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Sat Apr 23, 2022 9:07 pm
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alliyah says...



Hey Soulless! <3 It's really interesting seeing the variety of inspos for these poems - for instance the first poem is quite serious with an absolutely intense voice while this final poem is really light and has a more silly voice. You're doing interesting things with formatting and line-breaks too (especially in that 3rd poem) which makes the poems feel more distinctive and creative to me too - sort of giving a more distinct sense of voice to your writing. Happy poeting! <3
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