Young Writers Society

Hi guys,
I'm going to try to make poems, one to three (or so) for each forum. However these are my first poems and this is my first time trying out NaPoWriMo.
My goal: to make 10-15 poems this year.
Wish me good luck! This is my first poem (bad at meter and euphonious stuff) I dedicate this first poem to @Hkumar .

Poem 1: The truth

Back then,
I thought I loved some horror
I thought I loved Zekkyou Gakkyuu
I thought I knew how to correct my perfections
But all that ends TODAY...
Because I found my glows and glows
I FOUND the door near the center of my heart
I FOUND the almost anonymous sped up commercial replaying on the back of my brain:
"Today is no different."
But most importantly behind all those 'todays', I FOUND that I have to create the today and then the tomorrow.
Yesterday may not count, but the now does, and it won't be different if you don't focus on your senses.
Now I love comedy and suspense
Now I love my family,
And Now I love to write, draw, and make comics, Which is so fun,
That's i'm glad it's MY best.

and that's about it. Thank you, from, @BeingRivy.

But most importantly behind all those 'todays', I FOUND that I have to create the today and then the tomorrow.
Yesterday may not count, but the now does, and it won't be different if you don't focus on your senses.

This is such a beautiful message <3 You did very good for your first poem.

Hi guys it’s @BeingRivy again. Here’s my second poem.

Lonely:

Friends friends friends friends and friends
Everyone has one but not me
Support me now or I won’t make any
Everyone who has more friends than me
I
Shut
Down
Please be my friend
And what’s the
Point to having
No one?

And Now I love to write, draw, and make comics, Which is so fun,
That's i'm glad it's MY best.

I agree with @Hkumar about this being an important message. Poetry is all about sharing a little piece of our self and enjoying doing our best after-all. Great message.

The 2nd poem definitely feels a bit heart-aching, especially with the heavy line breaks. Keep on writing Rivy, and all the best luck on your poetry journey, I hope you enjoy it! <3

First of all I’m so sorry about yesterday, I felt upset because I suffered from writer’s slump again. Now I still have no idea what to write now and I’m panicking because I have to update my writing skills. People want me now. And if it’s now. I piss off and try to do it now. It’s frustrating but people are forcing me to write a new story and it’s hard to stick with other’s writing advice, and writing tips. I’m scared and I can’t write one story now. But I have to write now.

Poem 3:

Dreams:

Phantasmagoria floats around

I float around

to see

many of the things

that might disappear later

(when I my brain feels refreshed and needs to look at the brand new day around the brim)

There are similar faces, but also different ones

The same applies to the buildings and scenery

All blended into a fresh purée.

When I stay wide awake for the day,

It disappears like a mist to water.

But comes back in some nights to do it again.

Update: new poem for poem goal! Wish me good luck on the new one ^o^. This poem like “song” is based on one I have laying awake, delusional, thinking about me being a beautiful plastic and squishy body toy doll.

“Good Dolly” (delusional song poem)

Here’s a little song I want in dolly’s pretty little head,
She loves it, just and she loves me and I love her.

Dolly dolly

I love you

Dolly dolly

You’re the best

Dolly dolly

Little little

Dolly dolly

be my guest

Dolly dolly

Happy happy

Dolly dolly

In my world

Dolly dolly

You are happy

Dolly dolly

Good Girl.



Nighty night.
Don’t forget to wash away your triggers.
Master loves you, my good girl.


And that’s my poem. Hope you like it. From, @BeingRivy.

Here’s my updated poem, I apologize for the long break, but I’ll make another poem, here it is:
1. Easy Green Button

Have you ever felt like your eyes have purple marks and

you din’t like the wilting brain in a strong situation?

Have you ever felt like this?

Have you ever been o.k. With something you

didn’t like, and enjoyed your time despite not getting what you wanted?

Have you ever felt like this?

Have you ever found something good in your life

and made that day better without much effort?

Have you ever felt like this?

Have you ever tried to lift yourself up and

tried not to put in too much effort but you feel like other people really think

you are too good to be true?

Have you ever felt that way?

“If you do in all of those situations

then buy the green button on our site today

It’s make your life better

effortlessly

in an instant”-

I paused the commercial of the video

And realized I can’t buy it.

Maybe not online or in stores.

but I have a green button.

It may not be the same kind as in the commercial,

But I’m glad I have my own.

I’m happy to create this handmade magic in my mind

ALL

on my own.

2. Ragdoll

Me
one of the only ones left in the store
with no one to buy me
I’m just a toy.
I’m just a little girl wearing
a pinafore red dress,
striped long sleeved shirt
With a smiley face,
and some black shoes and pants.
I have the funny curly brunette hair.

What’s the big deal having everyone avoid me?
I want someone to love me
to care for me
to toy me.
I love people, don’t get me wrong.
I someone spoke to me, I want to like them and
understand them better.
I want to show them how to have fun like...me.
I want to strip a little kid’s mind off.
As in hypnotize them to give me their thoughts and love to me.
I want to tell them my fantasies
I want to tell them my quirks
I want to tell them my kinks
I want to tell them my sometimes painful,
but innocent secrets.
All in hopes they will spend time with me,
and tell them any of their funny fantasies.
Because I love people.

Finally, a little girl came.
She picked me up, purchased me, and carried me home.
With my head and heart in mind,
I hypnotized her with my head and will
And we had fun.
“And we all lived happily ever after. The end”?

These words simply won’t do for the two of us.
I sent her to my secret slave area, where she can
be all mine,
and to softly whisper secrets and joy
to every slave I love.
My slaves love me and
They can’t escape me,
Because I’m good at controlling
Other’s minds,
Like innocent, shameless slaves.

I might not have replied with 10 poems this month on NaPoWriMo , but at least I wrote some poems. You guys are all better than me. I’m full of self hate and I forced myself to make a poem because the process of making a poem is so hard especially if it’s metered and pleasing to the ear poetry.
No one has answered anything to me lately. And I thought it was because I did all that writing and it wasn’t enough to attract new people. I have been announced with bipolar disorder, autism, and self hate problems. I’m so sorry I failed you.
I thought I have friends, but no one likes me. This is really not a joke. I’m just a monster with not even a common sense of how life works. I learned habits and learned that I cannot unlearn my habits unless you had them for many years and you cannot stop them until you can manage to stop them. I wasn’t worth it, because on one hand even though I stopped my old habits, It took almost 15 years to break almost all of my bad habits. I saw that no one wants to pm me lately. Is there anything wrong with me? Why aren’t you doing something to help me? Go on pm me and let me know if you want anything that has to do with me.
From,@BeingRivy.

You did your best and shared some poetry and that definitely counts for something. Thanks for sharing your poetry this month Rivy!

I already praised you for your efforts to participate with us and even mentioned in my comment on your post that it really made me happy to see your Napo participation. But if still you want to just see the negative side then it's upto you. Just remember my example of a glass of water once again.
Again, Congrats on completion of 5+ poems in Napo <3