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Love the stylistic choices of capitalization + lack of punctuation, superbly conveys a tone of fatigue I think !!Today is NaPo
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Love the stylistic choices of capitalization + lack of punctuation, superbly conveys a tone of fatigue I think !!
:( -> aah I really adore oxymorons, and I think the simplicity and to-the-point-ness of this one works really well. (also--is "least favourite" a sneaky oxymoron? maybe? >.>)
(Actually, that's what I like about your writing as a whole; you're so good at writing effective and impactful poetry without a bunch of frilly imagery.I can NOT say the same for me @_@)
(OH also also just wanted to say LUV the changes you made to ornaments of identity, the black text is a bajillion times more striking and "whittle" is way more specific and effective I think <3 and how you've formatted "acceptable" matches the meaning of the word much more closely as well! )
keep up the fantabulous work ShadyVypy! looking forward to more lovely angsty poetry this April c:
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