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april poetry



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Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:50 am
Aley says...



I think the Cantaloupe poems are interesting, but the second one feels a little disjointed.

I love how visceral and exact they are about what you want them to say. You don't beat around the bush at all, which I like a lot. I just wish I understood what "The School" was so I would understand the reference to the plot of it.
  








I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom