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handcuffed to a badger; has rabies, quite a sweet guy



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Wed Mar 30, 2016 1:51 am
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Honey badger.

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Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:00 am
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Day One:

Open your eyes, darling,
it's not that bad.

The world is made out of lies and fakes
but who's to say they're not the truth now?
There's no difference.

Watch the world burn with me, darling,
from the sidelines.

Quit trying to ignore that you just saw
the girl from the table next to you
slipped poison into her husband's drink.

We're all going to die eventually
so why don't you appreciate
working forty hours a week for seven dollars an hour.

You can't run.
You can't hide.
Do you want to watch the world burn with me?
I want to watch the world burn with you.

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Sat Apr 02, 2016 10:34 pm
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Day Two

The weather is making it easy
to make an insult and pun of her name.
The hail reminds me of how she is.

She is the solid-to-liquid-to-gas
the fights going down the same way every time.
Her heart is not frozen
it is the stale soft drink
that lost its taste.

Its been some time
since she evaporated into the air
and I'm still sure she's the lead
still in Flint, Michigan's tap water.

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Sun Apr 03, 2016 3:54 pm
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MATURE LANGUAGE WARNING

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He is making her dance
with puppet strings in his hand.
Threatening to post pictures of her
but he doesn't know that his hands are in the background holding her by the neck.

His name iz back inside my head
after I never thought I'd see it again.
It is dawn now.

For all the people who knew him
it was all just an act.
A mask over what that fucker really is.
A paper bag can't hide his face
when you can rip it right off.

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Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:06 am
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Day Four:


Cars getting in the way of the train I am riding
getting crushed along with everything else in its way.
Do not stand in front of the train
I will not see you with these hazy eyes
or try to make myself believe I won't to keep the guilt out of my head.

The outcome of where I end up is predetermined
already set before the train even started its engine.
There is no signs of stopping
only picking up more speed.

No one else is in the train but me.
Bringing myself down
with the weight of a train.
Driving off a cliff,
I was driving to die.
Self-destruction.

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This is how my poetry is without being edited and I have other things to do so I'm just posting it raw straight after I write it. xD. I think my quality might be better when I get better ideas or if I edit it. Thanks for keeping up with my threads and shtuff.

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Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:21 pm
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Napo is a little like NaNo in that no one expects you to edit! There will be a workshop next week about editing your poetry if you want to join. But truthfully, I don't edit any of my poems before I post them. It's just what happens, and I love that! :D
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Tue Apr 05, 2016 11:29 pm
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Day Five:

Trying to get fillings for the broken teeth
trying to make them whole again.
Sometimes the people that can heal you
are the ones you don't know.

Losing baby teeth (goodbye old friends)
to be left with holes in my mouth.
I am not ready for new ones.

Teeth trapping my words
I do not have "freedom of speech"
when every word that comes out of my mouth can be made into poison.

When I'm old
all my friends will be gone
I will get dentures that come with fake teeth and fake friends.

For now
I am just trying to fill the gap.

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Wed Apr 06, 2016 11:12 pm
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Day Six:

Dreams are the fog outside that clogs my brain
fakes and illusions
hiding reality just for a little bit.

Ringing wakes me
it saves me.
My hand goes for the snooze
but I hesitate
even though I want to stay in a lie for a little longer.

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Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:41 pm
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A formless blob
molded by others' hands
is what I am.

Worries taking over my thoughts
please let me think
I want to do poetry or something.

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Fri Apr 08, 2016 11:01 pm
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My fire is burning low.
Let me feel something even if it's the flames crawling up my arm--
breathe, they tell me.

Breathing was easier on paper
so I will keep throwing the white sheets into the fire
writing to only let it turn to ash.

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Sat Apr 09, 2016 8:04 pm
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Solitude has become my best friend
always around when I want them to be.
I am not a burden to them.

The silence can put up with me
I cannot hurt them.
My poison cannot seep into their wounds when they are not looking because
I created the silence.

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Sun Apr 10, 2016 9:42 pm
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I want to say that she is toxic
and she is a terrible person,
but I won't.
I'd be lying.

We were both caged birds that got out
now looking at the cage we were trapped in
not knowing what to do now that we're free.

I kind of want back inside of that cage.
It kept me under the illusion I was happy
but now,
I don't know what to feel.

And this may not seem like poetry the way I talk bare bone without description
but I'm just telling it as it is.
This is not poetry
this is a desperate cry for help.

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Tue Apr 12, 2016 1:51 am
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Mature content warning?

Spoiler! :

Just because you're a seat behind me
doesn't mean I don't hear all the shit you talk about me.
If you want to talk trash
say it to my face.

Not because I want to hear it
but I'd like to hear your constructive criticism on how I
eat
drink
sleep
breathe.

Saliva is poison
transferring from person to person unintentionally
until everyone is infected.

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Wed Apr 13, 2016 1:48 am
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They tell me my love life is interesting
But it’s really the same cycle over and over again:
Meet girl, flirt, get heart broken.


A six second loop of a bad pick-up line
Maybe i should find a different approach
But my old ways work and I don’t trust anything new.
Those darn virtual realities, don’t trust ‘em.

I don’t want to have to superglue myself to a girl that hates me
I just want to
Find someone nice.

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