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K's Kyrielle



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Tue Mar 31, 2015 10:42 am
Karzkin says...



A tradition.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Tue Mar 31, 2015 11:56 am
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1.

Ignoring dominant-7 arpeggios from the next room
I listen to Anna spitting fire from her alto,
rose-gold lacquer set ablaze
like the sky on an April evening
with equal parts Summer's dying fury
and Winter's patient dread.
Altissimo E-flat shrieks and cracks
like frigid rusted iron straining
too long, strength of will alone
no match
for the shearing force of neurobiology gone wrong.
My own clear tone disguises
the lesson I wish I never had to teach.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Thu Apr 02, 2015 10:04 am
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2.

_______________For Warren Gerard Batchelor

No one is righteous, not even one

If I must die
write my elegy in blood, sanguine
discharge cloying with intentional disgrace,
sweetness and delight never hurt, the upper-lip-curl
of acerbic redolence
from the throats of unlawful-killing-four-years-walking-free.

7 heads with 7 comings
horns on their horns, wings
at their feet and on their wings
“This is the end for you mate, three seconds to live.”
If I must die, it will be slowly,
but not in prayer.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Fri Apr 03, 2015 1:47 pm
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3.

Dear ~,

If your guns are not better appointed than your pens,
then you will make little impression on Copenhagen.

Five years to the day since your first ruse de guerre,
I still think about the first time we held hands in the park, tied
together at the wrists by cotton and “just friends”. Skip ahead

two years and we’re fucking in a diplomat’s guest bedroom
with furrowed brow betraying
the nuclear hangover you left me with. Driving home

in pounding rain rehydrates the exoskeletal
prudence
you taught me in the interim.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sat Apr 04, 2015 3:20 pm
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4.

i.
we kept war in the kitchen

ii.
fire fell without sound
spikes
jets
sheafs and volutes
one step back two steps
forward

iii.
a set of twelve willow pattern plates
now eight
six
three

iv.
i waited for you
nineteen years
one-hundred thirty-nine million
eight-hundred ninety-seven thousand
lungfuls of red desert sand

v.
(S)-1-[3-(Dimethylamino)propyl]-1-(4-fluorophenyl)-1,3-dihydroisobenzofuran-5-carbonitrile
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:38 am
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5.

I boiled over
at 9ºC.
Mid-October, Winter still seeps
from concrete railway platform
like sweat of a shivering
fever.
Searing paroxysm
cannot penetrate a frozen core,
blood distilled
and served on the rocks, shards
of ice and basalt, splintering sleepers
witness to a pouring
out of tepid spirit.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:39 am
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6.

Brother,
I’m tired of looking for you and not finding you.
The kitchen is full of flies
doing all the work.
We’ll kill them all later, line up
their toxic black tuxedo corpses,
finely-set jewel-wings, proboscides
blessed with persistence only the starving
know, now rested.
Soon too we’ll be gone from this earth
where we know the colours of each rose bush
in mum’s garden, sleep
our long years in the dirt underneath impossible
stars.
But at least for today
you’re my dinner date.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:06 pm
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7.

Fly in low when it rains.
Strafe hard, wait some years, be shocked
when you continue to wake up
on the attack.
Grit teeth, 355 milligrams of caffeine,
dilate blood vessels to fire hoses, scour
clean dust from inside of your skull,
blow out the head-gasket behind your left eye.
These are the hands you’ll never forget;
“Remember, George, this is no time to go wobbly.”
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:38 am
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8.

“cold” they called me
adding heat to the nimbus
of my intent

in a trance
the corner of an indolent eye
absorbs the murmur of a Snowy Owl

this angel doesn’t touch the ground
billow of yardage

tactile sheers
and voiles and tulles

weren’t made to adorn the soul
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Mon Apr 13, 2015 4:32 pm
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9.

To watch you walk across the room
is to witness the birth of civilisation.
Your footsteps are flint striking iron pyrite,
showers of iridescent sparks
breathing life into everything they touch.

You are formed in contingent spaces;
your death will not be stolen from you
in a fiery blast, it is an appointment
kept for you in a private room. We are young;
we know how to die but not how to last.

You have god in your sights, blazing white crosses
in your eyes, incandescent into the afterlife,
and the life after that.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Mon Apr 13, 2015 6:04 pm
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10.

Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.

You found me like crushed glass
but not as cold

Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.

Dear LORD,
show me the way

Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.

I’m afraid of riding trains backwards
through memory

Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Let go of things that are not meant for you.

The letters I sent were not lost in the post

Let go of things that are not meant for you.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  








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