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Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:15 am
Apricity says...



Well, better late than never. Here I am!
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Wed Apr 02, 2014 7:41 am
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Apologies

Stars shone gold in the night blue sky
A cuppa of rose and a cuppa of mint
Jewels of red and leaves of green
A fragrant couple beneath the midsummer night

Stars glared white in the dark indigo night
A cuppa of dried leaves and a cuppa of sticks
Threads of heart and inklings of a promise
I'm sorry, I could not....
Get to you in time.

(Well, that was very interesting.....I don't even know what it is but...)
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Fri Apr 04, 2014 5:10 am
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I keep forgetting to post here....
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Fri Apr 04, 2014 12:32 pm
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Soft hard strokes

Illuminated with a desk lamp glow
I leech away the stress and toil
Beneath each stroke
Of graphite against white
And let the magic flow....
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Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:33 am
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Weeping willows

Symphonies of weeping angels
Sway their slender hair
And sing a morose tune

They dance a gentle dance
Of death and all its glory
Swaying their skeletal waists

In the ghastly autumn wind
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Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:22 pm
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Apologies - Its okay, I dunno what half I write is either! Can I just say that I love the word "cuppa" :D It sounds so homey and folky.

Strokes - I wish it were longer, the words are so sweet :3 Willows has a haunting feeling to it and you've got quite the diverse selections :O Where do you get your inspiration from?
  





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Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:50 pm
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:D Aw, thanks Audy. ^_^

Erm...I don't know. Looking outside the window, most of these are just random pieces strung together. Which reminds me...I seriously need to write more poems.
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Wed Apr 09, 2014 12:25 am
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You do! These two are really nice.
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Wed Apr 09, 2014 12:28 am
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^-^

*gouges self on love*

I shall then. You people are so lovely.
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Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:49 am
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Forgotten things are like broken tears

I have a friend, who likes to collect things

The glimpse of a raven's wing,

The reflection in a cat's eye

The rhythmic sound of rain falling on leaves.

She collect these, in snatches of whispers.

And locks them away

In the chambers of her mind.

And on days, when I accompany her to the endless graveyard.

She would walk amidst the grave angels, with bundles of posy

Lilies

Roses

Chrysanthemums

...


She says,

Forgotten things are like broken tears.

And she is on this world.

To peice them together again.
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Thu Apr 10, 2014 11:55 am
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Crystalized (a haiku)

Rain pounds the window,
And the drops crystalizes
On my frozen heart
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Thu Apr 10, 2014 4:34 pm
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These all sound like they come from the same fantasy story. Really pretty.
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Fri Apr 11, 2014 10:34 am
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^-^ Thanks Rosey, really? o.o
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