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Of the Golden Fleece and Zombie Ninjas



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Fri Apr 29, 2011 1:36 am
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GryphonFledgling says...



15. editing

burst of vicious, angry, brilliant slurry
scouring every cell, pore and organ
from a white-hot skeleton
spurting between joints
shattering enamel and sucking away marrow
leaving just a ghost of a shape
ready to be painted and pressed and ironed
and worn like a Sunday suit
with a little flower in the lapel
the color of butcher
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  





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Fri Apr 29, 2011 1:38 am
GryphonFledgling says...



16. cormorant

little ring
keeps you from biting off too much to chew
but
little fishes
don't fill the void of bigger things missed
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  





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Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:36 pm
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17. mutual

you scratch my back
I'll scratch yours
I won't ask what it was that bit you
as long as you don't go looking
for my patch of poison ivy
I don't want to do this alone
claw myself until I'm bleeding
because the blood will dry
and itch more
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  





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Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:52 pm
GryphonFledgling says...



18. why you don't see zombie ninjas

at first it seemed like a good thing
no pain
more incentive
then my arms fell off
and moaning about brains
equals negative ten stealth
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 4:02 am
GryphonFledgling says...



19. saying

smiley face
circle circle dot dot
rat race
drop it like it's hot
lessthanthree
epic win
shooting spree
take it for a spin
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 4:03 am
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GryphonFledgling says...



20. we

We stand back to back
because we can't see eye to eye.
I'll help you.
I don't have to agree with you.
I am reminded of the babe by you.
  








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