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Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:10 pm
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Kamas says...



8.

A/N: Thanks Pepper.

at five-fourty-five
I think your mouth tastes like a bflat
with teeth rung like
thankless copper coins
and maybe after an hour's spell
you could roll it in your mouth
and get enough to pay to -
take a breath,
until it plucked air from your lungs
and hammered it down.
When the rain comes back
someday, birds will forget to sing.


9.

i'll get rich
as soon as I forget how to write -
how words stumble from my lips
between coffee breaks.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:48 am
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10.

A/N: I can't write anything this week D8 I blame Gal for this one.


red-tile flat roofs are what echo tonight
when you hear the cicadas cooked
and buzzing like electric circuit.
things are on veined wings tonight
because our fingers were hooked all day
against the walls.

I'm sure if we waited long enough
we'd look like the copper wires
with the sun cradled in our curves
they told me jar flies are for
insouciance to run like currents.
Last edited by Kamas on Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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11.

A/N: Thank you again Pepper

we weren't sure the lobotomy had gone well until she
was swimming with the stars in her teacup
and said,

"You told me to keep something cosmic
tearing stars, and broken gas lines
in my teacup.

I had it with the ladies this afternoon
and space tastes alright with two sugars and in a silver spoon.”

we fed the ladies’ children arsenic, i wonder if it tasted like mercury or mars?

“Have you ever washed out star streaks from your eyes
or porcelain?”

we were cleaning out children from the cupboard for weeks,

“They scratch everything, jagged ribbed plasma cages
against my dishes, I guess those ladies couldn't taste it
my life jammed into semi-strong tea. and neatly folded lives
they like with cream always tastes better I'm sure.
You asked me to lock space away in the cupboard
until it's flavoured with jasmine and tea leaves,
so I can pour it in a cup."

we drink her in Earl Grey
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:49 pm
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This is excellent.

But Earl Gray is gross. >.<
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:54 pm
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DISLIKE CORAL.
I love Earl Gray.
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Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:58 am
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What can be said? This, I suppose aptly called Where The Streets Have No Name, about Northern Ireland and Belfast about the turmoil there; but eh, who cares? We get it, if just us.

wandering soul across time, viewing the bodies of the living on Earth
journeying train, journeying bus, journeying soul in eyes before the sun rises
and the moon finally sets, do you dance in operations as you wander
after death, reading poetry in the dancers taken in pictures timeless,
remembering flaw and beauty in the empty pew when the church bells ring?
wandering soul do jarring archetypes clog your mind, or do you think
in another mother tongue about another place where another life calls you
to wander with the memories of a dozen forefathers generations,
wandering soul have we written this before?

wandering soul across time, viewing the bodies of the living on Earth
journeying to see city and town and village the same, before the first sun rise
and the moon finally sets, do you feel alone in the fields of junebugs
calling you back to the past and cobwebs pinned down in the closet, wanderer
with no name, do you see past the atmosphere in space and the stars we named
in the last verse in the last line we wrote, last time we met? wanderer in the wild
do you see your eyes in the pictures of bodies and deconstructed objects, a curious
process obfuscated, and lips are sealed sealed with wax, this known before we met
wanderer of the wild through concrete jungles beyond city reaches,
wanderer of the wild in a country home, nameless wanderer
your voice echoes across time to our ears that have died before, of what we were
and what we will be
__________________________________________

Kamas, the road is long ahead. Each day is something new. The present is what we have.
From a time before we met you have progressed. From a time before we met we have changed.
Kamas words come as they may, edits and changes, the process is different, the exchange enjoyable.
Kamas, boldness and gripping focus, never settling for less, Kamas, transfixed on forward times.
Kamas obstacles and life looms forward, unspoken dangers unnumbered, untold, albatross waiting in Raven's hold
to fall and strike resolve from a body's beautiful dissection in lines and lines untangling words themselves.
Kamas, is your resolve steely placed and numb to fear? Ah, but you do not whisper yourself sweet fears, grow and expand and reliance beyond the confines of Plato's Cave, that which we do not know is not unfamiliar, simply a shadow to be kept with skeletons or faced in the light.
Kamas annoyingly flowery language isn't your cup of tea, eh?
Kamas the impressions of lives met at the middle are digested over the years, and the poetry within can never be retracted as a body unwinds across a universe forever across time.
Kamas a long road lies ahead; a rarity you were already on it, stay on it.



Ha. Well. Make what you want. :P Happy NaPo Kermit.
  





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12.

(Response - well crap look at me being a sap. Thank you for that comment.)

I never told you how I met the future did I?
then again I don't think I remember, somewhere
between the middle of the road and sterilized hallways
or in the shadows of the corner of the garden.
We never sat down in the sun for a cup of coffee
whatever effect it has to numb swollen nerve ends.

asked for my name the day we met after we shook hands
and when I told him I couldn't remember
I sincerely couldn't.
It's like words had stolen my tongue
and hung it right out of my reach -
and shook my skeleton until poetry fell out.

The present is his half brother, if you weren't aware.
The one with shaved words and no time
because he made a perfume out of it
for future's 7th birthday.

You know he told me something interesting don't you,
through the eyes of some red faced scar tissue
and I could feel it in the way my brain would swell.
He told me that the shadows in the garden
had things to say, and hemorrhaging lasts for a long time
if you aren't aware it's there.

I felt it pooled in my guts until it seeped through my skin.
I've been left untreated you can see
watching is just as bad as listening
and I let them pick out my vertebaes
to polish for keeps.

I'll be missing so many pieces
future can only guess so
because he's seen the potholes in the road
on his way here.

This rare road, does it ever stop being uphill?
because by now, free spirits start to rattle their chains
and poke me with my own bones, present seems impatient
and tap hs foot like ticking time
or a stick of dynamite.
before tick tick tick
and I'm back to
breaking my ankles in holes in the road.

Future told me someday
things will taste like the corner gas lemonade
if I don't ask questions.
I hope I've thought quietly enough
for him to notice I snuck back in.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:17 am
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13.

my days are numbered,
since the day I was born
I forgot something as vital
as the way our lungs shiver
or the way you have to
have to roll your fingers up
or the way I can't help but
stutter about disconnect.
We should have lunch over this, I say.
Talk about the weather and
the twitch of bodies trying to remind us
and how well the football game went yesterday.
Time goes faster when I think I have it figured out
it seems to always roll away
right before I die
and strip skin from metaphor from me from you
until all we're left with are scraps
we have to search through

(because I think I left my head in the mix.)
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:58 am
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I have never had so much enjoyment reading poetry before. I am in love with your stylistic, strong verse.


There's something special about your tone and choice of words that I guess is a bit nostalgic for me, and maybe this bias is making me digest the lines so eagerly. There seems to be an inconsistency in punctuation and things at times, but in a weird way, I feel like it adds to the delivery of the poem.

I don't know. But I like it. Keep it up.

i also noticed your music. :>!
  





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Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:46 pm
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There I used it, I feel better.
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14.

A/N:
One - I wrote this as part of a word war to get a hint to Sanctum after spending something like three hours trying to figure it out. Beware, insanity it ensues below. (And I had lots of fun writing it)
Two - The above song is awesome.



I wrote splatters of nonsense today.
Splatters of it.
that streaked the sky with white and blue
and lies to myself
because words seem selfish these days
did you hear me when I ran out to the ocean to drown myself
and maybe the sea guzzled me for a minute before I disappeared.
because when I can only sea-see the things froshed and white,
does my head make sense? and maybe that why I can only hear
the clouds sing when I can't see them anymore.

Did you know, I can't see two feet in front of my face
when I stutter words with shakey hands
that might explain the way my lines are all hacked up
because for once my guts
hand-sealed, delivered
rolled into my lap
and for once, I could taste the way that
sea salt crystalized around my eyes.

Did you know it was ropes not chains
around my feet and that the pavement was cracked
someone hadn't done repairs on this road for a while now
and all you could see was the way the detour sign
was on the ground.

Did you know that the places I've been sound like a bluenote these days
number 2023 is it?
Yes, you with the shirt and the arms in your sleeves and
a face that writes as it speaks. That only looks like a hung hat, or hung without one
I was worried your head would get warm after they'd broken your neck.
Yes, you with eyes like peaches, soft watery things, did they stick you in the dryer too many times?
Yes, you with the longest fingers I've ever seen, the ones you must has pulled out of their sockets to be that long, thought I doubt it would ever hurt.
Yes, you, digging through your pockets. Have you lost something, a voice perhaps?
You left it around the corner in that coffee shop on main street next to one of those cheap coffee cups.

Finding it again, oh good luck
you might as well dig for treasure
500 ft underwater with nothing but a mask and tuba.

Thoughts are precious things
numbered and stored and locked away on ordered shelves.
I got a shipping yesterday,
and an accidental one the day before and now
they're running around my house
and the funiture's all scratched up.
I wish you hadn't forgotten it,
I'm hoarse today.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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15.

A/N: short and took no effort/time to get this down, whatsoever. But I wanna keep my lead.

I was strummed apart today
with soft stories you wrote in the air.
I didn't know you could cut it like that
though it'd take forever
to cut all the way through.

I heard it rains in September the other day
can you imagine?
like we blotted ink in the office
before you tossed it everywhere.
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Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:04 am
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Kamas, I apparently like the poems it takes you no thought to produce! xDD
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16.

A/N: still working on this one

Palsies

I ran out of spare change a couple years ago
the kind that sings in pockets and on the smooth of my lips
and yours because some days I could see my muscles twitch as I talk
and other days I can't.

Have you ever looked back at yourself to see your reflection isn't working?
I've shattered glass and bones and nerve ends before
and cracked the world like an egg
while you sat stranded on shelled skins

and you'll realize
some things seem impossible to function,
like little gears all going the wrong way
and sometimes I think I left face
on the other side of the world
behind shattered glass or
the reflection of your jaw in copper coins.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Sun Apr 17, 2011 7:44 am
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You are loveliness in words that cannot be expressed. I agree with Hannah; my favorites seem to be those that you don't think about.
  








For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein