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Birthday Week '22: 18 Word Story Competition



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Mon Nov 14, 2022 5:55 pm
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looseleaf says...



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As you all know, our dear YWS is turning 18 today (11/14)!! In honor of its birthday, the mod team has decided to host some fun activities this week, including this one!

What is this competition?

Who: The 18-Word Short Story contest is hosted and judged by @looseleaf!
What: For this competition, you have to submit an 18-word short story of any genre by the end of the week. If it exceeds eighteen words, it will not be judged.
When: Entries should be submitted by midnight your time on Sunday, November 20th.
Where: Post your submissions in this thread!

Please have nothing explicit or anything that wouldn't be OK for the majority of YWSers to read in your stories! I look forward to seeing your submissions!
  





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Mon Nov 14, 2022 6:42 pm
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alliyah says...



Here's my submission for now!

Once I fell straight into the sky and met the sun; we are still spinning, him and I.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon Nov 14, 2022 7:29 pm
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TheMythMaster says...



My Super short story: Righteous

I lived for myself. Useless, I left home. I search. I see. I conquer, prove, and gain purpose.

-Myth (Happy Birthday YWS!)
Whatever people say there is Good and there is Bad, and there is nothing in between.

-Probably the greatest detective in the world
  





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Mon Nov 14, 2022 8:06 pm
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JoyDark says...



A Remnant of Love

He gave her his jacket, firehouse red. Now it sits clumped in her closet, faded to rust.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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Tue Nov 15, 2022 12:32 am
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Zenaida says...



The tides have finally turned, and we are no longer the same anymore. What did we do wrong?
Aida
(she/they/he)
  





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Tue Nov 15, 2022 2:24 pm
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fantasies says...



A war was at play in her mind, but nobody knew.
But he saw her scars.
He knew.
paige/fanta/fantasies
female
likes cheese
likes purple
kindness matters
  





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Tue Nov 15, 2022 3:41 pm
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Liminality says...



After long struggles, the first Sky-squid in millennia was born -- and promptly rained ink into Earth’s oceans.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Wed Nov 16, 2022 2:33 am
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FireEyes says...



oOOoOooO this should be fun!


"Hey! I know it's been a while. How have you been?"
"I'm so sorry, but who is this?"
I won't go down by myself, but I'll go down with my friends
I'm taking back the life you stole
Came a time when every star fall brought you to tears again

-My Chemical Romance
  





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Wed Nov 16, 2022 2:44 am
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LadyMysterio says...



Death held it's hand out and ask me to dance. I met it's dark gaze and dared it.
I know my worth, anyone else opinion doesn't really matter
-Agent Carter
  





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Thu Nov 17, 2022 11:56 pm
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Their hearts had sunk into the ground - had festered there; had become cold stone. Stone couldn't feel pain.
  





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Fri Nov 18, 2022 6:29 am
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Spearmint says...



Once upon a time, there was a homely princess and an imperfect prince. Was there happily ever after?
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
=D
  





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Mon Nov 21, 2022 4:22 am
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niteowl says...



Unknown man, her mother's funeral. His eyes are her own. Does he know? Does everyone? She can't ask.
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

<YWS><R1>
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2022 6:27 pm
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looseleaf says...



The results are in!



Before we start, I just want to say a good job to everyone who participated! I'm in awe of how you could all write such amazing stories in eighteen words. :))) Now, without further ado, here are your 2022 18 Word Short Story contest winners!

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In third place...


@LadyMysterio!

"Death held it's hand out and ask me to dance. I met it's dark gaze and dared it."

In second place...


@lliyah!

"Once I fell straight into the sky and met the sun; we are still spinning, him and I."

And in first place...


@niteowl!

"Unknown man, her mother's funeral. His eyes are her own. Does he know? Does everyone? She can't ask."


Congratulations to everyone who participated!
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2022 6:32 pm
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Stringbean says...



Oh wow, these are all super cool, guys, great job! I love how poetic these are
she/her/they
acethetic and paronoid
*waves leafy fronds*
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2022 6:35 pm
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LadyMysterio says...



Whoa third place. Cool!
I know my worth, anyone else opinion doesn't really matter
-Agent Carter
  








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