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should i every post a ramble again?

yes
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13%
no
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50%
i leave my option chosen by the conchshell (from spongebob)
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38%
 
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Thu May 05, 2005 2:46 am
Elizabeth says...



The day you left me

Me, so what if you left me for another… a guy even? How do you think I would feel? Would you even think about me at all? Would you think about him all the time and leave me in the dust?

I BET YOU WOULD!!!!
You always talk about brad and never about me and you always talked about me before…. But this is now

I wonder where you are now and how you are doing and I am also wondering why you left me in the first place. Is it because your other side happened to have higher wants than the one for me?

I thought you were all that I would ever need, ever want, ever live with but somehow I guess I was wrong.

I won’t forget the day you left me.

You, you, him, him, us, us, gone…. IS THAT ALL I CAN FUCKEN THINK ABOUT???
IT’S YOUR FAULT I LOVE YOU… LOVE, LOVE, HATE, HATE, LOVE, HATE!!!

BLOODY BLOODY why do you end up liking a boy you barely know???

You didn’t break up with me for him because you don’t know him and he doesn’t live near us at all! But you left me…. In spirit…. I don’t feel that same affection for you when you say something nice to me…. I don’t feel a heart beat anymore… thump thump thump it’s all gone! I am nothing
An empty shell

Covered in half eaten French fries and bloody fat lard lumpy figure SITTING ALONE IN DARK ROOMS MY FRIEND!!!!! ALL ALONE EATING NOTHING BUT SWEET glorious sorrow…

HELL!!!!!!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!!
HELL!!!!!
HELL!!!!
HELL!!!
HELL!!
HELL!
  





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Fri May 06, 2005 12:06 am
electricbluemonkey says...



*Cough*...that was very--*runs away*

That was scary, thats all I can say.
Gotta a find a woman be good to me,
Who won't hide my liquor, try to serve me tea.
  





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Fri May 06, 2005 5:34 pm
Matt Bellamy says...



I think you must have scared everyone, because nobody wants you to post another one...

lol, that was kinda scary.
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Fri May 06, 2005 7:56 pm
niteowl says...



ALL HAIL THE MAGIC CONCH!

Wow that was weird.
  








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