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The Fluffy Bunny Chronicles, II



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Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:41 am
Nate says...



Nothing yet. I am trying to think of stuff. Do you think the Fluffy Bunny should go across the bog of desire, or through the shallow seas of shame?
  





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Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:54 am
Aet Lindling says...



desire is to happy a word shame is beter.

and it should be shallow seas of shame becuz they all start with s but bog of desire has a word that starts with b and then a word that starts with d.

this is good writ more.

(note by Aet: See the first fluffy bunny chronicles for details. XD)
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:02 am
Meshugenah says...



shallow seas of shame, definitely.

Sounds more better.
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:09 am
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Desire should come before shame.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:09 am
Nutty says...



Shallow seas of shame. And make it have killer turtles.
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:12 am
Teague says...



I vote the Plains of Rabid Proboscis (sp?) Monkeys.

This should be like, an official poll. *nod*

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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:17 am
Aet Lindling says...



well, razor, sum ppl say its proboscis, lik the dicshunairee, but i say its probohsis.
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:30 am
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Oooooh, I see what you're trying to accomplish. But there's "Fluffy Bread Tanka" up there too, which probably isn't a good thing.
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:33 am
Nate says...



Heh, yeah, there is an actual point to The Fluffy Bunny!

For those who don't know, I'm messing around with making it such that any previous chapters you have to a story will show up as a table of contents. It's working now for the most part, but it's not working on all chapter stories.
  





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Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:44 am
Aet Lindling says...



Ohhh, cool then! I was starting to think it was like "Alison"... and suddenly you lock it and say "Please give more helpful critiques in the future." :P
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:20 pm
Matt Bellamy says...



Does anyone else find shallow seas of shame really hard to say?
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