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Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:45 pm
Derek says...



Hey everyone
looks like i'm leaving YWS
i can't fit in here just like everywhere else
for those who enjoyed my chapter 1 of my book email
me at Mcgfreak12@aim.com
i'll be happy to send it to you
Well Bye





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Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:58 pm
BigBadBear says...



Wait...

Don't leave! You just haven't had the chance to settle in. Don't leave. Please?

There are loads of people that are more than willing to help you out. If it's harsh critiques, don't take them personally. They don't mean to offend you or anything.

Well, obviously I can't stop you. Go ahead and leave, but just know that there is always someone on here that wants to be your friend.

Bye...:cry:

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Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:00 pm
Derek says...



No it has nothing to do with critiques i apprecheat all of those and it made me a better writer
I Thank Everyone For That
But writing and chatting are 2 totally diffrent things





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Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:06 pm
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Then... don't chat? :?

I know there were several months I didn't touch the chatroom, I disliked it so much. :P
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Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:24 pm
Aet Lindling says...



Well, he's apparently gone back on this. He's currently in the chatroom, a mere 15 minutes or so after he said he posted this, then said "Bye". XD
dun worry
it's all gun be k





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Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:40 pm
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Well, he shouldn't leave over this. But, he does have his right to leave as he pleases. He should give everyone a chance on the site first. I can name few members who are willing to help him with criting, showing him around the site.

The lovely Lindsaroo of course :)
All the Mods
Me ( I suck at lots on here, you can ask anyone XD)
Well..Every member will help :) just feel free to ask anyone anything and you will be in good care :)





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Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:48 pm
Aet Lindling says...



(don't forget Aet Lindling, Rick) XD well, not really. He's sort of made me his enemy. Not by any part of mine, I assure you. But really, everyone's treated like this Derek, you just have to tough through that first trial. It's sort of a test, those who make through have to have some quality. And your writing is good, maybe a little purple or whatever, but it's good.

So anyway, try not to fail the test.
dun worry
it's all gun be k





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:16 am
Wolf says...



Hey, don't leave!
Yeah, writing and chatting are two different things, but that sounds pretty thick coming from someone who can't even be bothered to use proper grammar.
That sounded mean, I know. But no one's asking you to chat - just ignore it, and stick to the Lit forums.
But it's your choice really. I think you might just want attention. :roll:
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Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:27 am
Derek says...



Well i dont want attention thats for sure...i dont strive for attention.
Plus for those who think this si there fault your wrong
it's my fault completly
i'm a jerk
i blurt out things that shouldn't be said
things that are rube and terrible
for those who don't like me (hate me)
i dont blame you...
hey maybe i like everyone to like me
and maybe i try to hard
i dont know





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:35 am
October Girl says...



Welll, you can't just leave! :shock: .... Well you can but.... We don't want you to! Don't leave... please? P.S. Your not a jerk. Don't leave!!!
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
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Then you are my star... ™





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:01 am
Firearris says...



Derek, we won't try to hold you back from leaving, but you don't have to go into the chat, you can just use the rest of the site. Like the others, I don't think you are a jerk and I don't think people want you to leave. But this is your choice, not ours, so bye Derek.



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Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:37 am
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Nnnnoooooooo!!! Don't leave!!!! Please!!!
What is there to do when all else fails?





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:47 am
Bella says...



Derek, I think a lot of people would be a little more than slightly disgruntled if you left. Look at all the people trying to stop you. And if you know YWS-ers, we would tie you to a chair and force you to stay if we could. *smiles* But we cannot--so instead we beg you to stay, because we love you that much. PLEASE!!!

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Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:52 am
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Drerek, please don't leave. I enjoy talking to you. You don't necessarily have to go to chat. Your funny and easy to converse with. You shouldn't feel as though you don't fit in. when I just came, I was so afraid to use the chat room, i avoided it. Then i slowly began to go in again.
What is there to do when all else fails?





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:08 am
LowKey says...



Derek,

If you don't want to be here anymore because of the chat, that's up to you. However, YWS stands for Young Writers Society. Not Young Chatters Society. :wink:

In any case, it's completely up to you. If you don't want to stay because of the chat, I won't tell you to stay.
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