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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:38 am
Bella says...



before i took
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:42 am
extrication says...



my laptop and
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:50 am
Bella says...



ran away from
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:51 am
extrication says...



the bear with
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:02 am
Bella says...



really sharp claws.
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:04 am
extrication says...



Then I kicked
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:06 am
Bella says...



you with my
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:21 am
extrication says...



cat drenched in
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:29 am
Bella says...



orange soda and
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:03 am
extrication says...



licked my lollipop
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:26 pm
Bella says...



happily. Then you
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:00 pm
extrication says...



skipped across meadows
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Tue Apr 17, 2007 2:04 am
Alice says...



singing, "I'll kill
I just lost the game.
  





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Tue Apr 17, 2007 2:13 am
Pushca says...



you, ta toi."
"Nothing I could write would be as shocking and offensive as censorship itself." -Deb Caletti
  





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Tue Apr 17, 2007 2:14 am
Alice says...



Then I tripped
I just lost the game.
  








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