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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:15 am
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Bella says...



whining
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:29 am
extrication says...



pining
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:33 am
Bella says...



lining
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:38 am
extrication says...



linen
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:44 am
Bella says...



lined
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:46 am
extrication says...



fined
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:49 am
Bella says...



kin
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:52 am
extrication says...



sins
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:02 am
Bella says...



fins
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:21 am
extrication says...



tin
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:33 am
Bella says...



pin
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:00 am
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Dined
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Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:02 am
extrication says...



liked
because memory moves in orbits
of absence, because she holds her hands out in the rain,
and rain remembers nothing, not even how it became itself.
- Las Ruinas del Corazon, Eric Gamalinda
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:06 pm
Cassandra says...



bile
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Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:15 pm
HeadInTheClouds says...



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