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Am I mean



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Fri Feb 23, 2024 2:13 pm
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queenofscience says...



I'm not mean. I'm a really kind person. I didn't mean to 'hurt' anyone from my story about Phe. I might change things in it a bit.

I feel very misunderstood. I would never mean to hurt anyone.

I'm a sweet person and that shows in my characters. No one has really looked at my stories. I feel really embarrassed in a way because I would change things. I want to keep some things though. I still want to talk about disability.
I am the science and science fiction guru.

The mind is beautiful, yet brilliant. You can think, create, and imagine so many things.

Eugenics= scientific racism.
  





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Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:09 am
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fatherfig says...



hum i read your story and i wouldnt think so. i think maybe just a tad hard on yourself- it reads like a short film and has a very dark-European ending but it think it was nice possibly reads more like a script though due to the amount of dialogue and little scenery! :)
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