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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:45 pm
Shady says...



if you want to!

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:46 pm
MailicedeNamedy says...



It´s your choice! Think about the age rating and co!
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:46 pm
NewHope says...



I continue unsure.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:46 pm
Shady says...



i mean may as well. what's the worst that can happen?

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:47 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



You will always get a review from me.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:47 pm
Shady says...



not this month apparently >.>

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:48 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



True. From March onwards, Mailice is back at reviewing and sometimes coming over to randomosity
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:49 pm
NewHope says...



Okay. I’ll post a few things in time. I might start a poetry place because I have way too many.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:49 pm
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sounds good!

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:49 pm
MailicedeNamedy says...



Poetry is a bit harder to review.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:50 pm
Shady says...



tru, depending on the subject

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:50 pm
MailicedeNamedy says...



Yeah. I try always to do more of an interpretation thing
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:51 pm
NewHope says...



I review line by line.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:52 pm
MailicedeNamedy says...



I try, but then I lose track of the whole.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:55 pm
NewHope says...



The whole is hard so I purposefully try to avoid it… I just end by saying it can be reworked or it’s very good…
  








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