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Tue Mar 27, 2018 8:26 pm
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Zolen says...



Make friends with the monster. (y)

(why wouldn't there be monster attacks in a adventure? Even dora the explorer has conflict.)
If the monster doesn’t *want* to be friends, offer it the apple as a peace offering.

Try to back out of reach of the monster, just in case it decides not to be friendly.



You don't think the horrifying monster wants to play, but the apple might distract it, so you can cower in the corner.

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Nope.

Nope.

Nope.

Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.Nope.

Push the button on the ground again. Maybe that might un-summon the monster.


Panicking and freaking out won't help you. So you start to think, realizing that if that button made the monster appear, it might make it disapear! You start to reach for the button the tentacle monster conveniently left you hanging over.

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Almost...almost...and with the power of plot armor you just barely push the button.

It promptly throws you to the ground and you hear a squish and swish noises below the water. Following by horrifying inhuman screams and pain as you smash head first into the metal floor.

....You hear a ka-cha sound and the rumbling of some far off engine powering up.

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Tue Mar 27, 2018 8:35 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Try any and all buttons or levers you can find. Maybe something will happen now that the monster is gone.
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Tue Mar 27, 2018 10:01 pm
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PrincessInk says...



Pull the blue lever.
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Wed Mar 28, 2018 1:00 am
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Zolen says...



Try any and all buttons or levers you can find. Maybe something will happen now that the monster is gone.


Pull the blue lever.


You pull the lever, which does nothing, so you push the button on the side of the thing, which lets out a dull hum before the whole room starts to shake, you walk over to the level, which fills the room with a metalic scream.

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THIS IS COMPLETLY HORRIFYING!

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As you rapidly rise up, the hole lets out a dull hum and a new space pops up. You quickly climb on top of it as the walls start to sink in.

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Oh good, you're back. Safe, safe floor.

You lost the apple.
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EternalRain says...



Press the red button behind the brown box
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Mea says...



Try to decipher the symbols on the back wall.
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
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Lightsong says...



Inspect that orange thingy.
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Wed Mar 28, 2018 5:28 pm
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(I thought it was pretty obvious what red and green means at this point. Oh well, easyist update I have ever done.)

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Try to decipher the symbols on the back wall.


Decipher? It just says "Puzzle Tutorial Room." In very clear Kunesh, the language you have been thinking in this whole time. Unless you want to explain to yourself how to read to yourself, there really isn't more to say about that.

Press the red button behind the brown box


Like with the other red buttons you have pressed this let out a noise and seems to have done nothing.

Inspect that orange thingy.


it seems to be some sort of weird grabber game, however there is only one object in it, a hammer, stuck on the grabber arm. You try to fiddle around with the box but nothing happens.

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Wed Mar 28, 2018 5:31 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Push the green buttons on the far right wall.
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Wed Mar 28, 2018 10:38 pm
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Mea says...



After pushing the green buttons and seeing what they do, push the red buttons next to them.
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
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Thu Mar 29, 2018 4:37 am
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Zolen says...



(Since these are also easy to react to, I can luckily update even though I don't have much free time at the moment.)

Push the green buttons on the far right wall.

After pushing the green buttons and seeing what they do, push the red buttons next to them.


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Looking at it, you push the left most button, which seems to turn off the little orange machine in the left most corner, and turn the blue machine with a broken screen's button from red to green. You push that left most button again and it turns off. You push the middle green button which seems to start to lower the middle platform before a short alarm sounds and you hear.

"Lift broken, please repair to try again.", then the lift/platform comes back up.

You then push the final green button, and nothing seems to happen, you step over to the platform for a moment and hear distant monstrous screams. It seems to be what lets those tentacles out so you push the button again. Loud roars sound loud enough for you to hear while next to the button panel, and then quickly go silent.

All of the red buttons let out a alert noise and then do nothing.

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Thu Mar 29, 2018 5:01 pm
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Lightsong says...



Press the left most button again and check the blue machine...?
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Zolen says...



(while that is the correct answer to more forward Lightsong, that is still barely a update, to make up for that, I will say what the machine does in here, it opens up a command menu that requires you input a name first. So feel free to vote for names for our protagonist, or try to input commands into the computer, the rules for this computers system is similar to any computers. If you give me a valid line of code you could even make a game in it.

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Name: ZOLEN.
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TheBlueCat says...



Name: Clyde
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