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Mon Dec 15, 2014 10:23 am
Zolen says...



Soooo, the christian god is telling me its easy? There is no such thing as a paper not littered with pictures and words by the time I am done with it. Or is it saying that I would make a amazing god?

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Last edited by Zolen on Tue Dec 16, 2014 11:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Dec 15, 2014 10:49 am
MarbleToast says...



Self-quotation? They are quite smart though.

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Dreams sprout tall so beautiful
to wither and fall off
Old and dusty, creaky and rough
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Tue Dec 16, 2014 7:51 pm
Iggy says...



7/10.
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Wed Dec 17, 2014 6:15 am
Dracula says...



9/10
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Thu Dec 18, 2014 7:14 am
Iggy says...



7/10. Neat and clean by spoilering it, but you lose points for the bad grammar. ;)
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Sat Dec 20, 2014 6:13 pm
Kopaka says...



8/10
sounds so sad with a touch of smile.
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Sat Dec 20, 2014 6:27 pm
Rook says...



6/10
I think you're supposed to have spaces after ellipses... Plus the first phrase reads pretty awkwardly in conjunction with the second phrase. And I don't know who Baroquemonger is, but that's more of my problem than yours.
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Sat Dec 20, 2014 9:04 pm
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10/10 lovely!
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Sat Dec 20, 2014 10:08 pm
Mea says...



8/10 I love the quote but I can't read the yellow part unless I highlight it.
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Sat Dec 20, 2014 11:44 pm
Iggy says...



9/10, cute quotes!
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Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:15 pm
Zolen says...



8/10 I like it
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Mon Dec 22, 2014 6:02 pm
mephistophelesangel says...



9/10! Because, haha, I totally agree about the second quote. It's really true. Maybe I like it because I always have the worst luck ever :P
  





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Tue Dec 23, 2014 12:41 am
LittleFox says...



9/10

A really good quote :) The German catches attention and the meaning behind it is very interesting. I like it a lot!
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Tue Dec 23, 2014 12:53 am
Rook says...



4/10
I don't know who said it, nor if it's supposed to be funny, and you should always say who said something. Sounds like something from Napoleon Dynamite, but also like something Gollum would say.
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Tue Dec 23, 2014 2:06 pm
Zolen says...



6/10

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