The sky paints a painting of art.
It's very repetitive...'paints a painting' and typically a painting IS art, so that seems repetitive as well. I feel like this line is forced because you needed it to rhyme with the last line, but that makes it sound bad. Rhyme schemes are only good when they are written around the poem, not when the poem is written around the rhyme.
Other than that, I have no idea where you are going with this--but it needs more.
Happy Editing,
WM
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