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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:56 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:56 pm
That´s the issue with poems. I don´t know what´s considered good or not good, because a poem can be anything.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:57 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:57 pm
So look at flow, good metaphor, where you are hooked, where you aren’t.
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:58 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:58 pm
I´ve tried to write a poem, and I went to far into metaphors.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:59 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:59 pm
Don’t overthink. That is the whole thing with poems. Write and work on the structure etc. as you write.
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
Yeah, I prefer novels. Blunt raw novels.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
Hehehe. Horrifying novels?
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:01 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:01 pm
I don´t know. Nobody could ever finish them.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:02 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:02 pm
Then you get 10.000 points from me.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:04 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:04 pm
I’m going to remember that. Quote you on my wall or something. Do you promise?
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:06 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:06 pm
Yeah, but my story isn´t fully published yet here on YWS. Only 16 of 21 chapters. But you could start.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:08 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:08 pm
I’m on 2. You need to start reviewing!
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:10 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:10 pm
What two? 2 Reviews?
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NewHope
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
NewHope says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
I’ve posted my prologue and two chapters!
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MailicedeNamedy
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
MailicedeNamedy says... · Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
I will read it from March 1st onwards.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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