Game change: to change people or environment?

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Last edited by Navita on Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:14 am, edited 2 times in total.




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This is accurate and good but kind of dry. I realize economics are dry and difficult to make exciting, but maybe you could try tospice it up using business metaphors. Otherwise, it was really fantastic, with good variation and mechanics and everything. :D
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