Young Writers Society

45. . . . and the bagpipes.

Haha how cool would that be! Bagpipes are pretty much amazing (:
Your bucket list is cute. I hope you're able to do all of it

This seemed to me like a wonderfully honest, and very well thought-out list. It kinda makes me want to make a "bucket list" of my own. You seem like a very artistic personality, and in-tune with your personal desires and passions. I only know this because you conveyed your characteristics so well with this list.

This was nice and inspiring. I loved it and did in fact read it. There is really nothing to critique, being because it is not really a formal piece. It is very ambitious and I love it for that. Great bucket list.

Merry Christmass:

100. Have anyone bother to read this piece because it's so long and meaningless

Yay, we can all be happy now! Lol

My critique: You forgot your family and friends! Id hope their important, and share your deepest stories, If you dont tell them, no one can!

My most important things:

1. Make sure my family knows I love them
2. Write the best book ever written
3. Have an awesome gf
4. Sing in a talent show
5. Spend time with my family
6. Tell everyone I will "miss" them
7. Have a best friend
8. Get a computer better than my current 3.6ghz, 8gb ram, Radeon 5750, Quad-Core computer
9. Take over the world
10. Learn. Everything
11. Not be a lonely loser

hahaha very nice and thought out. 36. Burn something. Something big. That's defiantly my favorite ( not that I'm some crazy arsonist). You're very ambitious and I hope you get to do all those things before you die!

Wow, you are ambitious.
Do you really want to do all those things? Either way, good luck with it all. You are going to be pretty busy over the next few days. lol
Again, I just loved how you formatted (or more accurately, phrased) everything to sound that little bit more enjoyable to read. Keep going.

Wow.. I have an (almost) exact same list....though I had a few scientific wishes (e.g. find the secret of anti-matter or see visit the other nine scrunched-up dimensions... Nice, though!

Wow- this is awesome!
I want to do almost every single thing on here. I love it when people make bucket lists.
# 100 has been accomplished!
I totally agree with # 96. I want a daughter to look just like me too! I look a lot like my mom, so I think it would be awesome to have a little me.

I loved this!!!!

I really love your piece. It's beautifully written. Good job on this. You're great at lists--why don't you try doing a few more?

Haha, think it's funny how people "reviewed" this! HAHA. But it was interesting, I got to write my own... I just got all my goals scribbled down in my head. Nr. 1 on my list though -- Save the polar bears. Which one of yours is like.. the most important to you? (I wanna learn karate as well.. it would be so awesome if i could kick peoples asses, cause when people look at me they think they can get me on my knees just by touching me... or blowing at me.

"56. Meet Morgan Freeman (Hopefully he'll last that long!)"

Better get moving on that one, Im just saying that the dude is old. Why would you want to meet him anyway, I would just want him to narrate my life for a day, but I have a boring life so his soothing voice may just put me to sleep, or maybe he will make it more interesting.

You have alot of work to do here, go to a great college, make movies, albums, novels, get married have a family ext. ext. ext. gosh, you have some big dreams, and a lot of them, too bad you wont achieve any of them...

Hah!

Just kidding, rooting for you, though I don't know you, that should be 102, meet me.

I ACTUALLY GOT POINTS FOR THIS!

Meeeh, 93's not all that. Although I do know a lot more about how to argue than I did...

Love it. Take me with you when you go and teach me when you learn. Or maybe I'll do it all first and take/teach you.

Mrs.E.D.