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Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:19 am
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Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:36 pm
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“I’ll stop being an evil bastard when it stops making you laugh.”

I stopped laughing abruptly, and he frowned. “Dyl...” I hesitated, but his hazel eyes urged me to go on. I looked away quickly, blushing. “If I told you I saw something that’s totally impossible – insane -, would you believe me or tell me to seek help?”

Dylan considered it.
“Seek help – I’ve always none you were the evil twin between you and Ingrid.” [color=#FF0000]Not sure what you meant to say here, I think the word none should be known.

I just nodded.

Taking my silence as a wounded one, rather than seeing my reluctance, Dylan said, “Oh come on, Alexis, I was kidding. Sure I’d believe you. What did you see?”
  





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Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:40 pm
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The usually bored-looking, acne-ridden guy at the fish and chip shop watched me with interest. The few scattered people all spared me long glances as I picked up the pace on my march towards the shopping centre.
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