Bear in mind these aren't chapter numbers. I have no idea why I'm saying this, I just don't want people to be confused. This is just the 5th part I've posted on YWS. I can't be bothered sorting out chapters as yet.
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It was almost impossible to breath – the dark basement was consumed with the semi-translucent smoke of cigar fumes and the echoes of merry laughter. The room had no windows or exit points, so it just built and built until an almost shadowy wall of smoke existed. José Guomez found it an arduous effort every time he wanted to inhale, and periodically began to cough. His eyes were stinging, but his pain tolerance would lead to greater rewards. The men in this room were worth more than his breathing, because these were the men who would help him make a fortune and secure his family line.
They were an odd bunch, he mused, as he looked up and down both sides of the long table where they sat. Some of them were scarred horribly; especially one man, who had a hideous wound that cut through one side of his face. The years had moulded it into his skin and it looked like a particularly unlucky birthmark. Some of them were old; one man bearing the last whiteness of his hair, and others were young; in particular a young lad barely old enough to shave. But they had a few things in common. They were all merchants. They all hated the British.
And they wanted to be rich. That was what had brought them long distances from throughout Portugal, Lisbon to Oporto - an obscure message from the eastern merchant José Guomez, promising them gold and silver in return for aiding the French in Portugal. At first José had feared patriotism would be a big stumbling block, but it seemed some of the naïve ones sincerely believed the French would be a stronger ally than Britain. Others fully realised they would become a puppet of Napoleon but were defeatist, knowing that any success against the French war machine was a far-off fantasy. Whatever their political beliefs, their undeniable greed was the same.
José coughed exaggeratedly to gain their attention. The conversation didn’t die instantly but instead tailed off after a few seconds, the raucous of noise fading to silence. They swivelled their heads down to stare at him at the head of the table, and José, used to such attention, smiled and realised he was in his element at last.
“Gentlemen! You have travelled here from all corners of this beautiful country to hear what I have to say. I congratulate you on your determination and your duty, because when you listen to my plans, you will not be disappointed, I’m sure. It is possible we will save Portugal and become rich at the same time!” he delivered eloquently to the crowd of men. He spoke clearly, not loudly, but his deep voice resonated and echoed in the small room and everyone could undoubtedly hear his words. Their patriotic hearts would spur them onto his side, thought José, but even more so man’s attraction and ambition for money would help him win them over even more. No one chatted as he paused.
“Today is just the beginning! By the end, we will be filthy rich, and Portugal will be rid of its enemies at last!” José spoke in a grandiloquent manner, his hands waving to support his mouth. He wasn’t being entirely truthful. France would still be there, but if he had his way, France would no longer be an enemy. “I know you all love Portugal. It is a country as patriotic as it is unmistakeably picturesque. From the luscious beaches to the bold green countryside, our hearts are entwined with the very soil we stand on. So why do we sit here and let foreigners control us like mere sheep?” José was in his stride now; the words were being spun from his mouth like an artist painting a picture. He was starting from the bottom, but by the end, he would be left with a masterpiece of a speech and everyone would fall at his feet.
He had their attention. From the start, a few had occasionally yawned and made other gestures of boredom, but now no one moved and instead hung on his every word. Except one man, placed securely at the back, who interrupted.
“You mean the French, senhor?” and stopped to laugh out loud, which shattered the silence that had consumed the room until then. He was a small man, but had a short untamed beard, and his always moving eyes added to the image of a wild man in the hills. “We can’t stop them treating us like sheep. They do it to the whole of Europe.”
The eyes of the crowd had swept to this new man who was arguing, and back to José who stared into the man’s defiant eyes for a while.
“I am not referring to France, senhor.” José replied, fighting the man’s strong gaze.
There was an instantaneous intake of breath synonymous across the room. Every man had gasped at José’s statement. One man, after a long, awkward pause, decided to ask. “So who are you referring to?”
José took a long breath, and began to paint his first masterpiece. “Britain.”
Instead of the previous rapid inhaling, instead there was an uproar of shouting and falling chairs as men in the room threw themselves into a fury. “Britain are our allies! They fight for us!” bellowed one man against the backdrop of loud noise.
“Gentlemen, gentlemen, please!” José shouted above the furious response that threatened to overwhelm the tranquillity of the room and situation, but his voice was strong enough to quell most of the arguments. Most of them men gave him dirty looks, a few picked up grounded chairs, and peace was mostly restored, except for a few grumbles from the back.
“Mr.Guomez, please explain to us your hare-brained scheme and I’ll be taking my leave. I don’t enjoy wasting my time with pro-French sympathisers. I have better things to do,” growled a man near the front, a rich-looking fellow, with a golden chain, and a small amount of grey-white hair left on his mostly baldhead.
“My friends,” José replied, opening out of his hands in a friendly manner. “Once I’ve had my say, none of you will want to leave.”
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Next bit is the battle *deep breaths*
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