Young Writers Society

Does there need to be a message behind a story? Its entertainment mainly. I just want to tell stories, in this case a story about a tortured soul ie Shadow, who cant help but do what he does as its in his nature, who wanders why he was created as he is if it all it brings him is hatred and hunters. This my friend is a tale about the nature of evil, its side of the story and the strange relationship that will develop between a monster and a child, he once tried to kill, who in the end will be his only hope of salvation.

Well, its definetly good, we all know that. Ever Onward, is this the only story your doing?
~Torpid

At the moment, yes. Although I may write a couple just for a competition. I started Shaman, which is in the Fantasy Forum (probly on the second page by now) but I want to be able to devote all my time and energy on it, so Im waiting for the end of year holidays...when school finishes entirely for me!!!!

cool, i gotta drop some stories cuz i cant handle all of mine and sometimes, i just get such bad writers block that i wanna scrap the stroy, sometimes years later, i come back to old ideas and make them better though. dont know what thats got to do w/ ure story but uh...keep up the good work!

It so good i though it was plagerism until i read "its velvety darkness" you shuold say velvet darkness.

I know I must sound like a broken record, but still, thanks a lot.
The next part, along with the other installments are now in Shadow (1, 2, and 3).

Go, check it out.