I've been waiting for someone to ask me this question. The title came about when I was watching a movie called The Patriot, as some of the writers on hear may have watched already. In American history, I assume soldiers from both sides; Britain and the Colonists were fighting for glory over the enemy to win. So in effect the armies were "bound for glory" but only one side could win to end the war. Also, but this isn't part of the question, just thought I'd throw it out, I based some Angus's character, off the actor that played the sadistic British Col. Tavington in The Patriot. That was the fun part, to create a seemingly cruel person, but at the same time, I tried to give Angus Goodfellow some humanity and show the readers that, though he was harsh that Angus still had a spark of love left, even in warfare.Out of curiosity, why is this called "Bound for Glory"? It doesn't seem to fit...Samuel Garrison's plight seems to be the opposite...
Can you give an example of how I might be using too much drama? I'll take a second look at the grammar, thank you.There's a lot of energy in this, I think, and drama (maybe too much sometimes ). Also, much better on the comma placement! Still a few grammar things, but I'll leave that for someone else.
Good point. I didn't catch that at all, since at the time in November I was running on little energy, writing in all hours of the night, lol, because of my work schedule. That's a very, very good point. I will definitely go research and re-write the dialog.Be careful to have your character's speech and inner duologue appropriate for the time period. They wouldn't fall on their 'butt' or say 'come on' or even use the word 'idiot' (I don't think). You can find another way to say the same thing, but more realistic.
Yeah, that would be my evil brain hard at work, lol. Actually, I watch a lot of warfare movies and documentaries of famous wars from around the globe. But your sentence also put a smile on my face because it was a great compliment. For you to be able to distinguish the differences between the two character's is awesome. To me, that means I've ALMOST done my job as a writer. Must fix little things first, then all is good.I can see there is a vivid difference between Agnus, cruel, physically unattractive, 'evil' 'redcoat', (creepy, with the blood in his hair...ugh!)and Samuel Garrison. It seems a little unrealistic, but it's interesting.
That is interesting to me and will re-look over the sentences. Thank you.You can always adjust sentences for flow.
Much thanks again Jacquie for proofing it, and thanks to the others for their help also. Now, I'm still anxious to hear what others felt about the ending.
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