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Prologue
Cole
Now
Cole
Now
I should have seen this coming.
As your best friend, your confidante, your other half, the only other person who understood, I should have known what you were considering even before you really did.
After all, you aren't the kind of person who does things spur-of-the-moment. That’s me, I have always been the impulsive one. You, though, you are the one who plans everything. Who sits and thinks for ridiculous amounts of time weighing the pros and cons of every decision. There was this one time we went to Subway, and just like always I picked a random sandwich off the menu, the first one that caught my eye. Mine was completely done and at the checkout by the time you even decided what kind of bread you wanted.
Suddenly I feel it, like a knife stabbing in my gut. I have been betrayed. You must have thought about this, been planning this. And you never mentioned a thing.
I don’t know who I am more mad at, you for hiding this from me, or me, for not seeing it sooner. I was supposed to be the one who always watched out for you.
Which begs to the question, what else have you kept hidden?
It is my fault that you are gone. Not my fault that you left to begin with, certainly, but I could have stopped you from going anywhere if only I had been more perceptive. This is my problem; I have to be the one to fix it.
I do not think about anything as I slip on my shoes, grab my coat, grab a backpack I fill with nothing. I do not think about anything as I flat-out sprint to the nearest bus stop like there is some way I can outrun my emotions. I do not think about anything as I get off the bus at its third stop and start walking toward the airport, my feet propelled by some invisible force. I do not think about anything as I spend most of my savings to buy a plane ticket. I do not think, I just do.
I have always been the impulsive one.
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Chapter 1 will also be posted today, and I will be posting as much of the rest of it as I can in the next few days. (It's 50 chapters total plus an epilogue)
Chase is also on Wattpad; you can read the full story here: http://www.wattpad.com/1589650-c-h-a-s- ... logue-cole
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