Holly-
Sorry if i didn't review that last chapter, I was to busy immersed in this story.
There were only two things that stood out to me.
1) This chapter in the beginning didn't start where it left out from chapter two. Instead where Mae is with her mom. I was just wondering what happened between those two chapters.
2) I was right! Or somewhat right. When I said that Mae was a metamorphosis, I'm totally sure she is. And especially her mom. With her mom changing in the basement, there's something weird going on.
Nothing much I'm going to say, 'cause I'm totally intriugued into this story.
-Merry
Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal. — William S. Burroughs
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