Wow, okay that was a little unexpected. Ripped his stomach out? Ew! (is secretly excited about Haaser's dismemberment. Jasmine is TORN up! Who is this other woman though? Her behavior seems a little familiar to me, but I'm still not so certain who this is. Haaser needs to leave Kyle alone! First Jon, now Kyle. He's so sick, he needs to die...and not just by having his stomach ripped out..er..you know what I mean. Lol. Can't wait to read the next! This plot is just getting better and better!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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