This was great! Kyle cried! and did Jon...just realize what was going on with him? Haha, that's really sad, he didn't get to see any of Kyle's real feelings as soon as he showed them. And Jon is captured again! This is getting better and better by the minute!
Loved it! Now I have another to read so that's it!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time. — T.S. Eliot
