This was great! Jon is sadly...breaking. It seems as though he won't last much longer. At first this therapy was helping him now, it's desroying him!
He's having a lot of feelings that I've never seen from him before and his responces are taking me by surprise. I hate Dr. Haaser for doing this to him, but he is such a wonderful character.
And then we go into electroshock therapy, which is my favorite kind of minipulative therapy! He'll speak aloud correct? While being zapped by a small bit of electricity at the temple. I think that's how it happens anyway. Oh, I can't wait for the next! Awesome job on this Brad, I'm feeling major character changes and developments!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
