Prosthesis #14 /P

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Incandescence
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:10 am
Incandescence says... · Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:10 am
Removed.
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Riedawriter23
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:19 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:19 am
XD this was so cute! I think the first part was in Ch. though? I can't help but remember the wimpy Jon as Ariel jumped on him thing and Kyle telling Jon to go to sleep early. Oh I love flashbacks, they were so sweet and "innocent" when they were little, and still hot!

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Emerson
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Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:19 am
Emerson says... · Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:19 am
Flash backs are cute ^.^

*informs you she read this one*

I should try telling someone I love them, and ask them not to respond. We'll see how that goes.
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