I've never heard somebody say "fastidious" so casually, but it might just be me.
Otherwise, this is a good addition. It's nothing astounding, mind-warbling (it makes sense, just go with it). To me, I see this as a bridge between one climatic moment and another. In any case, Donny is developing with a ferocious speed. And I sympathize with Janet, now, for her being so left out, dragged behind and pushed aside.
You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason. — Anne Lamott
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