He couldn't let anything happen to him.
Joe got up from beside the phone and turned to the robber. He hoped that the 9-1-1 operator would not hang up.
"I'm fine," he said to the robber, whose eyes seemed to glow with fire. "Just don't shoot my brother. I am going to open the ATM." Joe tried to raise his voice slightly, hoping the operator would hear him. But he didn't want to arouse any suspicion from the gunman, who looked as if longing to pull the trigger. Throughout all this, Max's expression was blank.
What is wrong with Joe? he wondered. He was going to ask the gunman to let him go, but decided not to, since the last time he said something the gunman caused him to experience some pain. Max didn't want to feel that again.
Joe then turned and went inside the archway. He was going to pretend he was looking for something, and stall long enough for any police to show up.
But his hopes were crushed as he felt someone come up behind him as he was pretending to rumage through the cashiers desk.
He turned and was looking up at the gunman's face, which was strangley calm.
"What is that phone doing on the floor," he asked. Joe began breathing nervously,and felt his heart plummet into his stomach.
"I don't know," he replied, walking back as the gunman began to come towards him.
"You didn't try callin' the cops, did you?" he said, as calmly as before. The burglars attitude was starting to scare Joe even more.
"Because if you did, I might have to do something drastic." He said.
The gunman then started to play with Max's hair.
"You got a cute brother here," he said, and then pulled on his hair.
Max started to scream.
"No, please stop!" Joe cried. Tears were now forming in his eyes.
Max continued screaming as the gunman pulled harder and harder.
"I'M THINKING YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO OPEN THAT DAMN ATM!" he yelled. His rage had surface once again.
He advanced on Joe. Joe then shielded himself with his arms.
"PLEASE!" he screamed. He then felt some of his teeth come loose as the robber's boot made contact with his face.
Joe flew back and hit the floor. He touched his hand to his mouth and felt the warm blood begin to flow.
Max screamed even louder as Joe fell. He didn't need to know anything to figure out that this wasn't good.
"THE COPS MAY BE COMING FOR ME, BUT YOUR BROTHER'S GONNA PAY FOR IT!"
Joe closed his eyes as he began to lose conciousness, and coughed up blood on the floor. A searing pain was racing through his head as he realized that there was no hope left. His tears dripped on to the floor as Max's screams were ringing in his ears.
The last thing he heard was a deafening gunshot.
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