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“Your breatheis unstable, your current temperature is thirty-nine point two degrees celsius. Immediate medical care and rest is advised.” A soft female voice resounds in my hazy mind. It’s just an earplug, but it’s damn right.
I feel so confused I can’t feel the mountain wind’s coldness, I’m not even sure if all the trees and plains I see are true, not to mention the strange colors; it’s like I’m witnessing a color negative.
Leaning on my silenced sniper rifle I somehow walk forward through a forest, repeating over and over again one single thought just like a curse – Where are they?
Dead bodies at the camp, poison darts, colleagues gone. Damn, funny job – It hurts to think.
I let out a deep exhale as I fall on my left knee. World seems to spin fast around me, I can’t seem to hear well.
“Warn— brain--tivi---itical.”
I – have to go. It’s my duty. Get up. Get up! I said – get up!
“Damn you!” I barely manage to stand up, yelling and leaning all my weight on the rifle.
Move!
Slowly I drag my feet forward.
A girl in cowboy clothes in front of me leaves me awe-struck. She smiles at me and points to my right.
“This way.” A very familiar voice.
“S-Sarah?!” But she’s gone.
Can’t- be real. Must be – the poison. She’s – dead.
Despite denying what I’ve just seen I anyway turn to the right (I'd say 'turn to the right anyway' would hit the ear a little more smoothly.)and continue. It just feels right.
With bland mind I soon reach an end of the forest and see vast plains and mountains. Unable to stand anymore I roughly hit grass. Ignoring the pain I somehow pull the rifle in front of me and grasp it with all my remaining strength.
I – do not have much time – In most of these I'd use ... instead of -, but I think that's more of a personal thing than grammar.left. My heart – too loud.
not to mention the strange colors; it’s like I’m witnessing a color negative.
With bland mind I soon reach an end of the forest and see vast plains and mountains.
The worst pain is at my my upper left arm, where I have a small box injected into my flesh.
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