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2.20.2049
Somalia. Desert. Somewhere between towns of Beledweyne and Baidoa.
The vehicle rattled on the desert floor. The ground was hard and almost nothing grew.
The men sitting in the back of the armoured truck were all alert and ready, but nervousness was bright on all of their faces, the fear of death, the feeling that the one dying today could be them.
Second Lieutenant Harri Petso was smoking his cigar. Cigar smoke filled the dark air in the vehicle. Like a cloud of smog it floated above them. His hair was charcoal black and his eyes a light brown. He was a heavily built man in his thirties.
Harri was the only man there who didn’t look visibly scared, and he would let his eyes gaze through the team he was leading.
Hard boiled each and every one of them, he though. These were the people he could trust with his life.
Harri saw himself as a masculine, macho man, and thought that that what a man should be like.
In Harri’s world men didn’t smoke cigarettes; men didn’t hit women; men didn’t cry and a man would never back out from a firm decision.
The last year had been harsh on him, but he had risen from the ranks and made it to the officer ranks, and he was proud as hell.
Harri, with his enourmous hand, slapped one of the men, who was quietly sitting on his left, to the back with a loud thud.
“Come on now Lauri! Why the worried face?” he barked a laugh.
Lauri was a lightly built, but visibly muscular man, with blonde hair, propably dyed that way, and deep green eyes.
Lauri smiled nervously, “I’m always a bit nervous before a bloodbath you know. I’m surprised you don’t look scared yourself.”
Harri laughed at Lauri’s answer, and addressed the whole team “When we get back home I’ll buy you all beers. How’s that sound?”
The men all smiled, but they were all too edgy to answer.
One of them, a brown haired young man called Bang, raised a question.
“Harri so how is this going to go down?”
“Oh you know. The uz’, we go in, kill all of the fuckers and we go out. Hopefully all in one piece.”
Bang just grunted in approval. That was the last they spoke on the three hour journey to the hostile militia camp.
Their mission was a simple massacre of the militia, that had almost accomplished killing the present king of Saudi Arabia. The king had immediately named the militia to the Finnish government, which was trying to find terrorist groups related to the New Soviet United World.
The Finish Wartime Intelligence Agency had determined that the ones behind the atomic bomb a year before had been the NSUW, and the newly formed Finish offense force had moved straight in to hit them where it hurt.
Unlike many had expected the NSUW hadn’t risen from the ashes of the USSR in Russia, but instead it had risen in a communist uprising in South-America, and spread to some western parts of Africa and finally revived some of the communist movements in East Europe. While war waged between the US and the Socialist Communist Union of Mexico, and the recent war within the country between several of the illegal militia groups had almost totally incapacitated the US to move to anywhere else in the world.
After the bombing of Finland in 2048, Finland had immediately joined NATO and declared itself an enemy of the NSUW.
A new branch in the Finnish offensive army had been formed: the Lightning Platoon. Named after the SS in Nazi Germany.
The sole purpose of the LP was to destroy all third parties used by the NSUW, and to destroy them quick.
Harri woke up when the truck stopped and the Saudi Arabian driver knocked on the latex screen that separated them.
“We’re here,” he said with a thick accent
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