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and my friend and she sat in the back.
He never cared about this girl before, and as a matter of fact, he had talked about how disgusting she was all the time.
He took her friends. Took her friends and turned them all against her. Soon she would be a thousand miles away for three weeks. Three weeks of escape from everyone who turned against her. She was upset. She was scared. She thought no one could help her.
He took her friends. Took her friends and turned them all against her. She was upset, scared. She thought no one could help her. But soon, she would be a thousand miles away for three weeks. Three weeks of escape from everyone who had turned against her.
They fought almost everyday near the end of their relationship, over the stupidest things. The day before the final break-up, he cussed her out. She was so frustrated that she was going to end it the next day. She cried about it to her friends, saying she didn't want it to end. They understood her feelings, but told her it was for the best. She put on her fake smile and agreed. Finally, she grew enough will to approach him at school. She told him that she was no longer feeling the same way. Before she could end it herself, he ended it. She was shocked. Absolutely shocked. She could not stand that he had broken up with her. She was supposed to be the heartbreaker, not him. Now she was the one with the broken heart, and he was the one who got off clean, or at least he acted like it.
Erk. He can only "finally be gone" once. I would delete the first one. And I don't really understand the "giving in" part. She knew his number by heart... so? Why does she feel driven to text/call him? If you say that, then you can move on to her refusal to give in to that urge.She sat at her desk and decided to un-tag herself, and delete him as a friend. Finally, he was gone. She deleted him from her Skype and phone too. He was gone. The problem was, she knew his number by heart. She could not give in. She told herself that she would not give in. She would not text him.
Vague, again? Like it seems normal that she would drive to his street and stop the car... why is she suddenly telling him to walk? What exactly has he been doing in the car? What has he been saying? How does that make you feel? Details, specifics, reactions... that's what will make this story real to readers.What confused her was, her ex decided to go home too. He could have gotten a ride with his other friend, but he got in the car with them. Her friend let her drive this time, so she had to drop her ex off. She drove to his street, stopped the car, and told him he could walk. He had gotten an attitude with her in the car and she was done. He got out of the car and walked to his house. She smirked as she watched him go.
Apparently him and this other girl was just a joke to make me jealous, but when it didn't work, he gave up and told my friends. I had my friends back. She was finally done, and she was glad that now he had noticed that she was better. She was happy that he wanted her, and now she could turn him down.
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