Authors note: It is a bit short, so if you find parts where description is needed please let me know, and I do not like the title so please give any and all suggestions you have. All reviews are welcome, please be harsh.
Weeks 1-4
Fluid surrounds me. It’s very dark where I dwell, and right now I am whipping through the fallopian tube to find my new apartment in the county uterus. I use to have tons of friend here, but they seem to be all moving away.
Whoosh, finally I’m here in uterus, but this place is so foreign, empty. I’m suppose to meet my landlord today. His name’s Placenta. Maybe when we meet I won’t be so lonely any more. We could become friends. I would really like that, but I don’t know where to find him. The sky, ground, all around is pink fluffy padding, like someone blew a bubble using bubble gum and popped it when it was at it’s biggest. I start knocking on the walls, hoping to find a door. A few minutes go by until a loud voice booms over the sky.
“Who beats on my walls?” Placenta demanded.
“Uh… uh.” I clear my throat, “My name is umm… my name is…”
“Spit it out already!”
“I’m… uh… Ms. Reyna. You… umm… you said you had an apartment I could look at.” I quiver.
“Oh yes, I remember you. The quiet one Martin had mentioned. This will be your new home for the next nine months. Unless you’re evicted, but I’m sure you’re a good kid. At least you look like one.” Placenta’s voice never lowered a notch from the intimidating tone he bestowed.
Once I plant myself along one of the walls a clear window comes to full view. It slowly fills with fluid.
“Help, help! I’m going to drowned!” I scream out to whoever can hear me.
“Quit your bellyaching. Your new home is being filled with a clear liquid, think of it has your cushion, something to protect you. You can’t drowned in here. We live in a world filled with water remember?”
“Oh, yeah.” I blush and slowly get settled in.
I start to realize there’s not much to do here. I wish I knew how to contact my friends, or maybe have someone move into the neighborhood. The silence whispers in my ears, taunting me, scaring me.
“Welcome home, Ms. Reyna. Hopefully you’ll like your stay.” Placenta returns to his own home leaving me here all to myself.
I gulp.
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