Chapter Three
What Kasey Saw
I stood there, just staring through the crack. They were on the bed, making out. I felt a tickle in my throat. I coughed, only slightly, but loud enough for them to hear me.
“Kasey?” I heard Emily say, “What are you doing awake?” I could feel her chocolaty brown eyes staring at me.
“What are you doing in here?” I managed to say, my voice shaking, “I didn’t know where you were, and I heard something in here.”
I started to walk back to the guest room, but Emily grabbed my hand and spun me around. I could see her naked sweaty body gleaming in the moonlight. “I’m sorry,” she whispered, her mouth only inches from my ear, “Scarlet wanted to know what it was like, after Joel went home, and I said I would.”
I tried to pull my hand away, but Emily tightened her grip. She kissed my neck gently, than moved to my mouth; she kissed lightly at first, than harder. I didn’t want her to make me forget about what she did, but I wanted it so bad. I tried to fight, but it was her victory.
When I woke up, I was on the floor in the hallway, with Emily lying down next to me. Both of us butt naked. Scarlet came out of her room, and shook Emily to wake her up. To my surprise, Scarlet was naked as well. She had a curvy body, but it was sexy curvy.
“I’m sorry about last night,” Scarlet spoke softly, “I just wanted to experiment. But I really liked it” I didn’t know whether I could trust her or not, I mean if Emily had let me get away last night, I would have gone back to my family, hurt and depressed.
“That’s ok,” I finally managed to say, “But does that mean….” I couldn’t finish the rest, it was just too hard.
“I don’t know,” she spoke, her mouth close to my ear, “I am kind of confused at the moment.
When Emily finally woke up, Scarlet and I were sitting on the couch, watching TV, and drinking green tea. She came down the stairs into the living room, and started rubbing my back.
“Em,” I spoke softly, “I’m sorry about last night, that I didn’t listen to your explanation.” I turned my head towards hers, and stared into her blue eyes. I put me tea on the side table, and turned on the stereo.
We danced for what seemed like hours, to what ever music was on. Both our bodies were sweaty. Scarlet joined in, grinding me from the back, as I held Emily close to me.
I wasn’t expecting Emily to kiss me, while Scarlet was massaging my shoulders. I gently pushed Emily aside, and twirled so I was face-to-face with Scarlet. I put my arms on her shoulders, and swayed from side to side with the beat of the music. I kissed her had on the mouth, just as the door swung open.
“Are you two drunk or something?” Asked Nathan, Scarlet’s twin brother. That was a question that we were used to.
“So what if we are,” Scarlet shot back, “Go back your room, you twerp.” Nathan slowly walked to his bedroom, which was just down the hall.
Scarlet instructed for Emily and I to follow her to her room. We followed her up the stairs, and down the hallway to her palatial beige bedroom.
‘Scarlet!” Nathan shouted from the bottom of the stairs, “Mom is on the phone.” Scarlet ran out of her room, and quickly down the stairs, without anything covering the top half of her body.
“Gross!” Nathan said loudly, “Put a shirt on!” She ran up the stairs, and entered her room.
“Hey Mom!” Scarlet said cheerily.
“You’re drunk again, aren’t you??” Her mother’s voice buzzed through the phone, “And you better not have been kissing Kasey Chambers.” She sounded angry.
“No, Mom, I am completely sober,” Scarlet spoke softly into the phone, “And what are you going to do if I was?” With that, she hung up.
“Be right back, I have to pee.” I said quickly as I left the room.
I walked down the stairs, opposite of the washroom, and down the hall towards Nathan’s room. I had this sudden urge to see him. Lust; I knew what that felt like, because I lusted after Emily all the time. I opened the door, without knocking, and saw him watching a video on his laptop naked, sitting on his bed, his penis was erected. He tried to cover up what he was doing. “Nathan, it’s too late, I have already seen.”
“Oh,” was all he said.
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Critics needed, my second chapter went unnoticed.
The plot line too is very confusing. I think that you should try and straighten this out before you write any more. Plus, I agree with what C.J. said. If you are fourteen, try and be less explicit. Seriously, honey...DO YOUR PARENTS KNOW ABOUT THIS? You need to also clean up your grammar, spelling, etc. Also, your characters seem nothing more than sex objects--have I walked in a Bond Girl movie? 
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