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(Ah, so maybe the month isn't in between May and August if the damp sand has chilled the boy. Still, two things: One, why hasn't the boy attempted to build a fire? Surely, the infants would be the first to suffer, since younger kids are more easily affected by the cold. Two, it could be just me, but I'm picturing the boy standing by the ocean in the beginning of the story and sitting on the sand, at night. So, if it is chilly outdoors, maybe you should include in the beginning of the story, the boy wrapped his coat tightly around himself or show he's shivering; something to signal that his lack of clothes aren't shielding him very well).sand underneath him was damp and determined to make him damp as well, and soon he became chilled
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